Loki Wyrd

I was originally intending to write more for the first one, but I haven't gotten around to it yet. I can only write so much of a positive sort of work, before I collapse w/in myself. And I'm glad you enjoyed the second one, I just wrote that earlier today. I wrote the other one last night.

I haven't posted most of my latest writings here, so I guess I'm overdue. I wrote one poem that those that don't know any better would call a nice sort of poem, and another to balance it that's more down my alley. Here goes: I'll meet you at the end of the world; There we shall be together, Just you and me forever. Let us walk towards the sunset; Don't look back. It's not that we need to forget, Just don't lose track. We can stay in the shadow, Where only the wild may grow. Life may thrive once more, As it never has before. For there you shall be, Standing next to me, Walking hand in hand, Leaving behind the end. For us it's just beginning, The sunset never ending. ---------------------------------------- I'll bottle up my anger And inflict it on myself, For the benefit of others, If only it would help. Trying to say what words can not, I can't say a thing. I can string together these words, Which I can't bear to sing. You don't know what you're doing, But would you care if you did? But for the burns and cuts, I must keep it carefully hid. Nothing can cut deep enough, Or burn away the pain; It's only flesh and blood, All destroyed or spilled in vain. I know that scars may heal If only given time, But certain wounds may not, Just take a look at mine. What do you think?

No, thank you - I insist. Here I am trying to maintain a low profile, and you have to go and blow it for me by mentioning my name. Just don't say it 2 more times, or there could be trouble.

Happy bday~~>

Happy belated bday. I'm 19 as well...cheers! =D

Happy bday~~>

~~Hey~lo~~>

Congrats!

Oh, I only just now noticed Mira's sig. I usually just skip right over those.

Hey sleepless, it's good to see you posting here. I'm not sure what the name the song thing you refer to was/is, but I agree with you about Bob Dylan.

/me stumbles into the room stoned and hears Vincent Silver's declaration "Thanks man, I'm sure I'm very fond of you as well" /me sits down at a table in the corner and falls asleep

Twisted sympathies intertwine To utterly surround A glance is turned your way When you're nowhere to be found You wonder what you're seeing When your vision turns to dark All you see escapes you Even your own art When your turn is taken You always walk away Walking down your own line From which you fear to stray You never want to compromise Even when you know its right Though you still feel unwilling To try to put up a fight Looking for the answers To what you think is true You know what you're looking for Because it happens to be you Truth is just a symptom Of one ill in the head Turn away from it Before you are led Live life from afar And you shall be kept apart Do not go through life And refuse to even start

No, I don't have to watch television. Some shows that I really like though: Simpsons, Seinfeld (reruns), Family Guy (reruns ), Aqua Teen Hunger Force, Space Ghost, That 70s Show, The Daily Show, Arrested Development, South Park....oh yeah, and I like a lot of anime as well.

Enthused by the other crowd And waiting alone I turn to a stranger To learn of the time But all that he knows Was learned in a well Utter Nonsense At Its Worse..........or is it..............no, it really is.........truly..........would I lie to you.........ok, well you got me there.........you go to hell.......ok then, good night. More to come....

I like it. Keep up the good work.

I'm here. I don't know what I think about this...it's not really my type of poetry. But that certainly isn't your fault.

I am trapped Within my skull Pounding on the walls To no avail Looking out Through the windows No escape From the blinded Echoes sing In the darkness I'm lost in it To not be found

I made you With my eyes I open them And all is realized

The light draws me nigh Growing upwards Reaching for the sky The breeze it stirs me so Feeling so alive As only it can help me grow The water washes over me Cleansing and cool As I hope it will always be Rooted in the dark Beneath it all Left without a mark

'lo

The work in its whole: I'm breathing flames To die another time Trying not to forget But to forget trying Why do this to yourself Time after time Trying not to forget But to forget trying Taken by yourself Time after time Trying not to forget But to forget trying Forget about you You drunken fool Troubled by youth You are denial Remember the pain From all that you are Troubled by fear Wearing its scar Always remember Who that you are Troubled and here No matter how far Choices made are past And presently to come Seldom comes my way But I'm not yet done When I come to rest Is anyone's guess I can only hope That's your best When I come to To my fright I can only hope For the coming night el fin I changed the second line, last stanza.

Choices made are past And presently to come Seldom comes my way But I'm not yet done When I come to rest Is anyone's guess I can only hope That's your best When I come to To my delight I can only hope For the coming night el fin

.... Why do this to yourself Time after time Trying not to forget But to forget trying Taken by yourself Time after time Trying not to forget But to forget trying Forget about you You drunken fool Troubled by youth You are denial Remember the pain From all that you are Troubled by fear Wearing its scar Always remember Who that you are Troubled and here No matter how far It's getting longer...and now I'm writing it for this forum

*copy/pasted* Ok, so I'm stoned. So I'm going to try and construct a poem for you folks. Here goes... I'm breathing flames To die another time Trying not to forget But to forget trying Shit...that was pretty good, for a start at least (at least in my stoned mind). Sounds like something that would be good for a anti-pot commercial. D'oh!

Yuki, that last one wasn't supposed to be song-like, sorry for making that unclear. And I like the second could...it sounds kind of rough and awkward, but that's how it was intended.