Peredhil Posted September 5, 2003 Report Share Posted September 5, 2003 I've been filled with rage So I made myself gentle. I've been filled with greed So I learned to give it all away. I've been filled with lusts So I learned to feel hearts. I've been filled with pain So I learned to heal others. I've been filled with Self So I chose to be Other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beautiful Nightmare Posted September 5, 2003 Report Share Posted September 5, 2003 *hugs her dad* Aww hun i really like this poem it rules! But i dunno theres just so much you can do for other people! Some times they will never appriaciate the things you do for them! But i want u to know that i do! Every piece od advice u ever gave me i have taken and look at me im now a happy person! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorciere Posted September 6, 2003 Report Share Posted September 6, 2003 Learning is one of the greatest things we have the ability to do, actually doing it shows the mark of true strength. Sometimes it's very hard to admit our own faults, even harder to change them, but it's the person content in their heart that can see beyond the mirror. Well written! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayshela Posted September 6, 2003 Report Share Posted September 6, 2003 i saw myself and was displeased i saw far off what i wished to be through the vastness of the space between through the multitude of tiny steps through all the times i lose my way and fall i still see you hand outstretched to help me back on my way your encouragement that it will work out okay your unswerving belief that i AM okay and that i can be better i still see you showing me what can be done showing me the paths from which to choose and which will lead me far astray showing me how to be me i still see you thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tattered Posted September 6, 2003 Report Share Posted September 6, 2003 This life is full, of hidden choices. You were wise and patient enough to listen and find them. You are obviously a person with much life experience. Anyone who reads your work can tell that you have something special inside. Sometimes the very hardest task IS to look beyond yourself and, give. That just cant be sincere AND faked... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrenWind Posted September 6, 2003 Report Share Posted September 6, 2003 I've been filled with rage So I made myself gentle. I've been filled with greed So I learned to give it all away. I've been filled with lusts So I learned to feel hearts. I've been filled with pain So I learned to heal others. I've been filled with Self So I chose to be Other. Some thing about this makes me wonder how much has been lost in between the extremes. *hugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parmenion Posted September 6, 2003 Report Share Posted September 6, 2003 /me agrees with Wren. I did enjoy the extremes. It was short but very to the point. Very enjoyable and liked Ayshela's response too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted October 9, 2003 Report Share Posted October 9, 2003 (edited) I made a present for Pere! Click to view <-- Flash required. Its my first flash movie, so its got some design flaws but it was fun. Edited October 10, 2003 by Rune Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zariah Posted October 9, 2003 Report Share Posted October 9, 2003 Rune, that was beautiful. I watched it 4 times and cried like a little baby. I am sure that it touches so many hearts. Just as Peredhil does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalypso Posted October 10, 2003 Report Share Posted October 10, 2003 Wow! Beautiful poem Parmenion. I loved your interpretation of it Rune. Ayshela, I've never seen a more fitting response. You're all very talented. I strive to follow in your footsteps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted October 10, 2003 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2003 Thank you Rune! I'd never have thought to match those pictures to the poem, nor had the talent to do so. You definitely have a knack for turning lemons into lemonade. looks at Kalypso and winks. Yup, that Parmenion *is* a talented fellow! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted October 10, 2003 Report Share Posted October 10, 2003 hmm its really small on bigger monitors Looks much better on my laptop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrenWind Posted October 10, 2003 Report Share Posted October 10, 2003 (edited) a wonderfull presentation Edited October 10, 2003 by WrenWind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Regel Posted October 10, 2003 Report Share Posted October 10, 2003 The collabration was amazing. I was taken by the balance of the two extremes. The duality is there in all of us. Some will find the courage to seek their potential. Thank you again Peredhil and also to you Rune. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayshela Posted October 10, 2003 Report Share Posted October 10, 2003 Beautiful, Rune. A wonderful poem done full justice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalypso Posted October 10, 2003 Report Share Posted October 10, 2003 I'm sorry Peredhil, that was a big oopsie. I was a little tired when I wrote that. Had one name in my mind and typed another...didn't know fingers had a mind of their own did you? Of course you know that comment was meant for you. *grins sheepishly* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted October 10, 2003 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2003 heh, I *live* tired lately. That's why the wink. It was meant as gentle fun teasing, as between friends, or people who want to be friends. Hugs I recently got four hours of sleep - I recommend it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalypso Posted October 11, 2003 Report Share Posted October 11, 2003 I took your advise Peredhil, it worked wonders! Always easier said than done. I'm sure you all have had a hard time quieting an over zealous mind! Thank you for the understanding , and I look forward to forming friendships with all of you. Such a wonderful group you have here. *hugs everyone* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beautiful Nightmare Posted October 11, 2003 Report Share Posted October 11, 2003 *hugs again* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justin Silverblade Posted October 11, 2003 Report Share Posted October 11, 2003 That's a wonderful poem Peredhil! I was very taken. Stopped by for a bit of reading before I got to my homework, and was very glad I did! It was a real treat. Message and mood, really stirred memoires. Splendid. And.............. the present from Rune! What can be said but: :woot: That's great Rune. Those images, especially with the music, complemented the poem beautifully. I've saved the link and am going to pass it on to a few friends of mine. The Pen is soooooooo cool. *hugs* - Justin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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