Rune Posted September 30, 2003 Report Share Posted September 30, 2003 Not really supposed to be grammer intensive and correct and its certainly not a work of art critic wise but it was fun to imagine. -------------- She peeked out from the blossom Of the smallest of the mums And whispered to the sleeping fox “Get up silly, before they come!” The fox paid no attention To her tiny cries and shouts He simply went on sleeping As she trampled all the sprouts Her efforts went unnoticed And made her anger flare Her tiny wings ablaze As she floated in midair The fox let out a snort And swished his tail about The fairy tumbled backwards -A miniature wipeout! “Here they come” she squeaked in alarm as the leaves fell from the trees just as she had predicted a giant horde of bees! “oh no” she cried in fear “what on earth should I do?” “I cannot leave him here!” “Oo and those bees look angry too!” The fox went on sleeping He did not seem to care The fairy stood her ground Floating in midair The bees passed over quietly And continued on their way She sighed in relief as the danger passed No longer in dismay The fox gave a snicker From his comfy napping spot “Did you see that?” she demanded “That was an awful lot” “I did” replied the fox "but you have no need to fear those bees would not have hurt you they would have not come near” “how do you know?” she asked -waiting to be taught "Cause those were honey bees! And sweet, well, you are not." The fairy grumbled loudly and bonked him on the head “good thing I like you fox now get on back to bed.” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Appy Posted September 30, 2003 Report Share Posted September 30, 2003 *giggle* I really enjoyed this, thank you for writing and posting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zariah Posted September 30, 2003 Report Share Posted September 30, 2003 Wow Rune! This is such a cute little story! I really like this a LOT. I think if we could pick a poem of the day, this would definitely be THE poem of the day! Hugs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayshela Posted October 1, 2003 Report Share Posted October 1, 2003 LOL it *was* fun! thank you very much for a desperately-needed smile. a truly delightful reading break. **genuine guaranteed germ free hugs** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted October 7, 2003 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2003 Thanks for the nice compliments everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Regel Posted October 7, 2003 Report Share Posted October 7, 2003 Rune that showed a certain flare. The interplay between the two main characters was certainly interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted October 8, 2003 Report Share Posted October 8, 2003 Watching the little demoness, standing there so earnestly reciting, with one foot angled in toward the toes of the other and her hands clasped behind her back. Cheering when she finishes, knowing that she'll never believe her work is as good as it is. Sighing as she blushes and ducks back to work You post such good works. I'd love to see more from you he coaxes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salinye Posted October 8, 2003 Report Share Posted October 8, 2003 Awww I can't wait to read that to my children!!! They'll just LOVE it! ~Salinye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted October 9, 2003 Report Share Posted October 9, 2003 rune ala aesop fables? very nice... how'd you do it... hmm maybe you should try to write a ballad or epic poem... The ballad of princes rune... hmm could work... revery the dreamlost "day-oooo(banana boat song)" the dream continues... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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