WrenWind Posted March 28, 2003 Report Share Posted March 28, 2003 Tender moments over time and space we collect them moments in time that are frozen in our memmories a smile, a tear a sweet note an eyelash brushed softly off a sleeping cheek "I love you" whispered in the dark little things remembered and stored babies laughter infectious bubbling wonderful silly cartoons shared with a child gather them, savour them hold them close to your heart these moments are what life is all about Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alaeha Posted March 28, 2003 Report Share Posted March 28, 2003 Wow. That's the truth... no question about it. It's those moments that you wish you could keep for a lifetime that make life worth living. Very nice. One request though, if you decide to edit it... Could you perhaps reformat it a little so that you don't have the whole thing double-spaced? Silly, I know, but nonetheless, it bothered me a bit. It made it look like each line was it's own stanza... Perhaps I'm only bringing it up because I cannot, myself, find anything else to complain about. Whether that's the case or not, however, is much like the question about tootsie pops. The world may never know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted April 9, 2003 Report Share Posted April 9, 2003 Its really beautiful and a statement about life that should not be over looked. With all the eye candy and technology to keep us busy nowadays..I wonder if people go through life without realizing those things that you captured so well in your poem. I agree that the formatting is a bit strange. Kind of mademe stumble over it a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wyldpatienz Posted April 9, 2003 Report Share Posted April 9, 2003 Beautiful writing. Thanks for sharing this... Tyler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted April 14, 2003 Report Share Posted April 14, 2003 nifty. Nice reminder of the joys of parenting. You have a knack of defusing my urge to strangle my kids. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gwaihir Posted April 14, 2003 Report Share Posted April 14, 2003 A lovely way of collecting random images to make something more out of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annael Posted April 15, 2003 Report Share Posted April 15, 2003 an insight into life that unfortunately few ever realise. thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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