Vlad Posted February 12, 2003 Report Share Posted February 12, 2003 As I sit here, rejected always- Dreaming, scheming, plotting, Now I will get back at you, For all you have done, To me and all those, That came before, Suffered from, Your lies. Why? Must you- Be so cruel, To these so close. Do you feel no love? Fearless and wicked... Is it like this with every- One that you meet, or just Me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archaneus Posted February 12, 2003 Report Share Posted February 12, 2003 Cool. The format is very original. I like it. Very nice. ~raises two thumbs~ "Two thumbs up." Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted February 12, 2003 Report Share Posted February 12, 2003 (edited) yeah kewl... neato format... am flattered that i expired u... kewl... way kewl... um, but really i expired that? hmmm, was something i did in fall? did anyone get hurt? Were their witnesses ... should i be worried ...does spok know? heh, j/curious... anyway, think u out did me style wise... oui vay, I feel like the mackintosh... revery the dreamlost "doodle or else!"(elfshoes) the dream continues... Edited February 12, 2003 by reverie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyril Darkcloud Posted February 13, 2003 Report Share Posted February 13, 2003 Very nicely done, Vlad. I posted some more detailed thoughts about this piece in the Critics' Corner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vlad Posted February 13, 2003 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2003 Thanks for the positive encoragement people. I wasn't sure 'bout this one... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted February 13, 2003 Report Share Posted February 13, 2003 Good stuff. Cyril's commentary is right on. Good job to you too Cyril. Both of you - well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted February 13, 2003 Report Share Posted February 13, 2003 Vlad, you do amazing work as a poet, keep it up. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted February 21, 2003 Report Share Posted February 21, 2003 I like the visual art as well as the words. I see poems as being artistic to the eye as well as the mind, if presented correctly. Thank you for sharing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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