Tasslehoff Posted February 6, 2003 Report Share Posted February 6, 2003 I got this poem published in a book. No clue where the damn thing is, but yea.. =- Unrelenting -= As the night falls The memories cry out Tears fall from the blue eyes Lined with detest and love The past envelops the present While the future is hindered Where to run to, where to hide Darkness everywhere, Unrelenting As the time in front slows I remember moving to fast And along came the grateful past Filtering out the bad, the disgust Emphasizing the good, those moments Yet the darkness everywhere, Surrounds me! The foolish lies that have followed The fruitless tears that lay upon my cheek The void happiness swallowed without a glance The acute darkness surrounds me UNRELENTING! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoomGaze Posted February 6, 2003 Report Share Posted February 6, 2003 Another brilliant poem by Tass... well hmmm, good work, and dont forget to read mine too :P Again, very nicely done(if there is such a thing ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archaneus Posted February 6, 2003 Report Share Posted February 6, 2003 Love it! Probably because it's not happy. Lol. Good poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted February 6, 2003 Report Share Posted February 6, 2003 I can see why it was published. gratz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vlad Posted February 6, 2003 Report Share Posted February 6, 2003 I'm sure many people can relate to this, myself included Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted February 11, 2003 Report Share Posted February 11, 2003 Ooo its very good. Its full and complete. I can see why it was published! Congrats! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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