RIvaL Posted January 31, 2003 Report Share Posted January 31, 2003 (edited) So I wrote a poem... my first one in a long time. Funy thing is that the silly thing decided it wanted to be written in spanish... and when I translated it into english it doesnt sound quite the same. Oh well. I still like them. So Here they are el cielo azul se estira perpetuamente, hacia el horizonte. el temor a lo desconocido, de mi alma se apodera. el azul, tan bello y cruel, llena mi alma y corazón. no quiero ir. pero contigo a mi lado, quizas no sea tan malo, aventurarme hacia el mañana, y perderme en el azul. the blue sky goes on forever, towards the horizon the fear of the unknown grips my soul. the blue, so beautiful and cruel, fills my soul and heart. I dont want to go. but with you by my side, it might not be so bad, to go towards tomorrow, and be lost in the blue. Edited January 31, 2003 by RIvaL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted January 31, 2003 Report Share Posted January 31, 2003 In spanish? WoW.. i wish I still knew a bit of Italian, it always seemed to flow a bit better than out hacked apart *english*. But either way, the poem is awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted January 31, 2003 Report Share Posted January 31, 2003 Wow indeed. Personally, I think it flows beautifully in both languages. "So beautiful and cruel" - I love that line. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted January 31, 2003 Report Share Posted January 31, 2003 A beautiful poem in English, and I'm sure its the same in Spanish! (Which I can't read, so I'll take Peredhil's word for it. ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted February 3, 2003 Report Share Posted February 3, 2003 Beautiful! I am glad you decided to post it. Great job Rival-kun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archaneus Posted February 3, 2003 Report Share Posted February 3, 2003 Although mi knowledge of Espanol es quite limited yo like. lol. My version of spanglish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted February 4, 2003 Report Share Posted February 4, 2003 beautiful in it's simplicity... rev... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoomGaze Posted February 4, 2003 Report Share Posted February 4, 2003 got one word.. WOW.. it's short, but gives off so much imagery.... good job.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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