DoomGaze

Swoop of Hunger -------------------------- On a gloomy summer's night, An owl hoots his song. He lurks on top a his tree And hunts his prey that comes along. Feathers sway in the gentle breeze, His eyes pierce through darkness' veil. He swoops down, and glides in the air. Talons grip hard a like a clenched fist. He finds his first victim of the night, A mouse who was running around. His accuracy serves him well, And he pins the poor little creature to the ground. Handing out a swift and sudden death, He brings his prize back on the tree. A good meal, which will satisfy him, So he rests, for he is no longer hungry.

The person above me getting his masters degree into being a "Perfect Angel"

Out of all the names.. go figure

The person above me, well.... loves me!

Beautifully written, i like this poem alot.. i say you should accept her Wyv... and we may have another excellent poet on our hands.. Looking forward to seeing more work Elvida...

Thx Rune, i just did..... and the girl im talking to you about, is the one who posted right above me..

wow Tass, great poems... reflecting on your real life is a good way to base ur poems on, i usually do that myself, with the occasional few. :P GOOD WORK

Excellent poem Deadly Nightshade.... i like ur name too great imagery, and the title fits this perfectly, with teen troubles.... had so many of those myself, doesn't everyone? Again i gotta say, great poem, keep writing, i look forward into reading more.. Thx for sharing...

Brink of Insanity ----------------------------- You can feel it coming, Emerging from the deepest corners of your mind. Different voices speak, ever so haunting, Your thoughts, so hard to find. You can feel it rushing in your veins. You desperately try to pull yourself together, Reaching where the last of your sanity reigns. But all hope is lost, gone forever. It fills your eyes, circling around, Pushing out all the good you have left. Madness overflows in you, and hits the ground, How can it take this away? This is theft! Now everyday, you feel like this, Locked up, in a stray jacket and all. You speak, talking about the things you miss, But it doesn't help, as you continue your fall.

As a fan of dragons, i like this poem alot. hehe, you should change the title.. it goes better. Everyone underestimates the power of the Dragon, but know this, a dragons power is eternal. MWAHAAHAH (ok i'll stop now) Thx for sharing.... GREAT POEM

Vlad on a rampage... i like it, actually this is pretty good. I've been in your spot a couple of times, haha and boy, did i wanna kill someone, i got so mad haha, but then i realized that i could and i wanted to stay with them, but it was a lil too late.. Good Job nicely written poem Thx for sharing

your right Canid, it does sound good.. nice poem, make more plz, i like your work, Thx for Sharing

I Wish I May -------------------- My last resort is to look at the sky, Because that`s the only thing I can do. Living so far away makes me cry, I wish we were together, me and you. Maybe Fate will change his decision, And have at least something more to say. It is my goal, like a man on a mission, That we will eventually meet some day. When I talk to you, my heart seeks yours, But clouds move in, reminding me. It starts to rain, then it pours, But still in the distance, it`s you I see. Come on, please, just give me a sign. Free my spirit, body and soul. This I wonder, will you be mine, To cherish, to have and to hold. (Tass, you know who this poem was to, so be quiet)

Hahaha... i play AM also.. in the KotA guild good poem hehehe..... Go eradication!!! *grin*

Minor errors fixed, thx Rune

I agree with Tass and Ozy, very good poem indeed, keep writing, looking forward to more!

With an application, you should send one in right away, i love the unique rhyme scheme, i thought it stood out, and a poem about heroes, well that took the cake... Great Poem, i suggest you apply now, with that kinda skill, u'll get accepted definatly. Looking forward to reading more of your poems, really amazing :)

Another brilliant poem by Tass... well hmmm, good work, and dont forget to read mine too :P Again, very nicely done(if there is such a thing )

Good poem, keep up the good work

A Veiled Paradise ------------------------------ The veil becomes uncovered by a faint speckle of light, More and more quickly appear. Many stars, so beautiful shine so bright And absorb the darkness, which causes it to disappear. The dancing moon hangs by an invisible thread, And slowly inches it's way to the other side. It moves until all darkness is dead, And the string gets cut, and behind the light it resides. The sun makes his move and pulls himself up, Shines even more than the stars before. Rays so smooth, like hot tea in a glass cup, Heavenly, some might say, and nothing more. Fortunatly, this doesn't last for just one day But everyday, so we can appreciate, How free this sight is, nothing to pay. That's what I like about it, and nothing to hate.

What i mean about dead is not that he doesn't care about the girl anymore, it's that, the words are there in a sense but he cant express them to her, and it kills him inside because of this... OR maybe the word "dead" is too powerful for this kind of poem.. Thx for the critism Rune... always appreciated

Unsaid Words ----------------------- Speak clearly, For fog runs through my mind. Listen patiently, My words are silent, hard to find. You ask me what's wrong. I try to speak. Telling me to be strong, When I know I am weak. A storm brews in my head, Ever so violent it thrashes. Every thought of you, dead, My whole system crashes. You start to walk away, But who are you going to? You disappear, and I stay. Then the words come out..."I Love You"

Gets it point across.... i can sense anger in the air.. all the better to express yourself with.

HEHEHE dont forget who told you to post this up :P Or come on your door and take out my and blast you hehehehehe... told ya it was good

got one word.. WOW.. it's short, but gives off so much imagery.... good job..