DoomGaze

Happy Bday Pered! i guess im a lil late, lol, but hey here's a pencil! its your present, its magical too hope you like!

yawp is to utter a loud, raucous cry

Immortal's Weakness ========================= Long ago I stood in these halls, Marbled slates ran beneath my feet. Now confronted with my echoing calls, The faint sound of uttered deceit. Veiled light concealed in the darkness, Covered by a thick blanket of sin. My guide, the blessed shield Aegis, Radiates for me, new hope to believe in. But still, Fate leads me in circles, Round and round I go, non-stop. Is this what happens in the world of Mortals? Do they break down and start to yawp? Even immortals can't escape being lonely, With angelic glory, honor and all. Stretch my wings, and help me see, A helping hand, to stop my fall.

DeadNight Warrior ----------------------------------- He trods on dampen black earth, Clad in russet black armor. He wields a blood-thirsty sword, Touch it, and feel nothing colder. Each step he takes, Decay follows him around. Each village he visits, Every hero is downed. Look into his eyes, As dark as the night's sky. Look for his lost soul, Only to hear a shrieking cry. If he catches you in his path, Your better off living dead. If you try and run away, Pray that he will go for the head.

Flower of Lost Hopes ---------------------------------------- Skyscrapers to the creatures below, Swaying from side to side, Their beauty they bestow, Opening your eyes so wide. I reach out to one, To hold it within my grasp. Pedals coloured crimson, With it's beauty, you gasp. Lovely lovely flower, Will you win her heart for me? If you do, teach me this power, So I can hold onto her for an eternity. The time has come my little friend, Show me some of your magic. And please do not fail me again, Hopefully this time, it won't be so tragic.

Congratz man, im glad you found your way around here :) welcome to the Pen!

One Day ---------------------------- One day my friend, You and I will be on top of the world. Arising passed those who didnt believe, Believe that we could make it, Watching our dreams finally unfurl. One day my friend, We will both die as happy as kings. From having nothing in the beginning, To acquiring everything in the end, Just you wait, and see what Fate brings. One day my friend, We will see the truth unveil. Deep world of lies will remain in the darkness Forever trapped in a chest, sealed away. But only then, can we avail. But today my friend, We will play with cards we were given. Dream about doing the impossible, And living our lives to our very best. It will be our temporary haven.

Final Words From Me To You ------------------------------------------ Your hand is vibrant with energy, Yet it remains still. Your eyes, so beautiful, so pure, Yet there are voids, emptyness to fill. People you used to know, Invisible you are, pass you by. You have come to think that nobody cares, So you remain, alone, left to die. Shadows lurk around every corner, You must learn to keep them at bay, Neglect not the Present, Past or Future Or worse you'll be with each passing day.

Unanswered Doubts ------------------------------------------ I close my eyes I see white feathers falling. I block my ears, But still, I hear you calling. What's wrong, What's happening to me? What am I supposed to do? Tell me now. Make me see. Just say something, Just tell me the truth, no lies. Just don't run, Without saying any goodbyes.

nice imagery Alaeha, i love you comparing wind to a friend, yes, if your out alone, and no one to talk to, the wind is always to listen (HEY I talk to myself and the wind tends to listen YOU ALL DID IT DONT LIE) And yes there a few in my life that are much more important to me than anything else... it is always good to be loved, in one way or another.. Enuff blabble, i like this poem, and i love poems of nature and using it's elements to compare to other things..... Great use of words, love your rhyme scheme and keep writing... THX FOR SHARING! ps..... you tried to get the Thousanth Topic didnt you?!!? MWAHAHAHAH well i have it!!! It's all mine!!!! MWAHAHAHA!!! *cough*cough*

The Thousandth Topic ---------------------------------- Well the pen seems to grow, Bringing interesting writers it does so. Wow, a thousand topics made, Poetry does not seem to fade. Just here to claim, My place in fame. As I will be the person to get, The Thousandth Topic to be set. Yay for me, hoorah for you! Better luck next time to whoever who, Makes the next Thousandth Topic in here, Celebrate with me! You have nothing to fear! Congratz on making 1000 topics!!! YAY!!! KEEP WIRITING YOU GUYS, Enjoy this piece of creativity freshly spun outta my head! :P :D

go away Wyv!! This is my domain!! Just Kidding!! This poem is great and i have to agree, great rhythm.. Love your work, post more!

yo yo Ryan, good poem! haha.. i fear that u might surpass me in the poetry ranks... *cough*itwillneverhappen*cough HAHAHA good luck with application, and dont worry, we will duel LATER.. and surely i will win Until then.... MWAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!

So Tass, the date has finally been set, and when that day comes, silence will echo through the halls of MSN Messenger, and no smart ass comments can be heard As long as your still here, i will talk to you, so we will keep in touch and i will ttyl on MSN, best of luck into the AF and make sure everyone is in there right place.. Everyone will miss you, especialy for 6 long years, i will be awaiting your arrival on MSN as usual... TTYL, Jeff

Yeah, Great poem, i too myself am a fan of the series, gotta love BOF.... Anyways nice work! P.S. did anyone try BOF:Dragon's Quarter yet? I did and its pretty good

- No Escape - ------------------------------------ It isn't working, your Hell's disguise, Because I can see Heaven in your eyes. Don't try to fool me, with that innocent look, I won't be on the list of all the victims you took. Your gaze is as solid as a rock, Every passing moment, you seem to mock. In your own little world, you seem to rule, But in mine, you are nothing but a fool. You give chase to the insanity that feeds you, Even though it renders your skin black and blue. I stay right here, right where I am, Because god forbid, if I follow, I'll be damned. Finally I have escaped your terrible grip, Away from the fears you used to nip. For now I am strong, I am free, Up, up in Heaven, thats where I'll be.

How Deep Does Sorrow Go --------------------------------------- Nobody knows where it goes, Or where it ends. You feel weird inside, The sadness it mends. You break down, Your body starts to fall apart. Like a serrated knife Straight through the heart. Eaten from the inside out, Like a rampaging disease. Always moving, Killing everything it sees. In due time it passes, But scars it leaves behind. Now I must move on, Another Love I will find.

Thx for pointing that error out... i fix it... you could imagine what 7 3/4 hours can do to you at work you think alot..

seems pretty interesting, although there are many spelling errors, i can still read your work (to me it looks like your first language is French) love to see more. For some reason, this reminds me of The Legend of Dragoon, where Lavitz looks up to his father and becomes a knight for his kingdom..(thats just me thinking that) Anywho, continue this story! Thx, DoomGaze, ~-=Like A Shadow, I Will Be With You Until The End Of Time=-~

Watch me -------------------------- Look at my lifeless soul on this grave, None of which, anyone could save. Watch my spirit flow so freely, Constantly bound by the chains of eternity. Look into a mirror, see no reflection, My mind wandering in the every direction. It shatters, falling into pieces, All my hope, just suddenly ceases. A blink of an eye is all it took, For all the writing to vanish from my book. A fit of rage, pages are torn, Wishing that once again, I could be born. The hourglass sips the last of its sand, And, still there is no helping hand. Everything on my mind is Kill, Kill, Kill!! As I watch my own red blood spill. My own life drains it's essence, Traitor, I say, in my own presence. Everyone turning their backs on me, But here I plead, begging on one knee.

seriously, where are you good poets come from? lol! u just appear outta nowhere.. Wow, this poem is superb, and i can see why it is one of your best. BAH!!! Im speechless... it is so good! WoWwOw!! Thx For Sharing!!

Got two words for the poetry you posted: :woot: Simply Amazing :woot: Such vivid, descriptive imagination, about the horrors of depression, and the light that is and always be there to pull you through. This was really wonderful to read, and I hope to see more of your work. Again, i must add, very magnificent! Thx For Sharing

Was there a tragedy in your family or someone had just moved away from the house? If it is then i like the fact that you used wings to symbolize his flight... Great poem i might say, very emotional, great use of symbolism. I guess you feel quite angry that he left you. Thx for sharing

Dream World ------------------------------------- I look outside a stained glass window, Beautiful colours dance in the air. The light shines hard, but emits a faint glow, And I lose myself, as I start to stare. I think about the good times, and the bad, Thinking about the future, what lies ahead. Will it be good, happy and not sad? With memories that can never be dead? I get lost, wondering where I am, Lost in my own dream world. Looking behind, the door slams As I begin to watch my life unfurl.

congrats and good job on being accepted Not too many people pass the application status under Wyvern Tyranny ()