Salinye Posted April 11, 2003 Report Share Posted April 11, 2003 (edited) Just as one lighthouse stands among the shore as a beacon to guide the lost home... Just as one Mountain stands tall and majestic it's presence alone the source of awe... Just as one banner alone inspires unity among an unrest nation... Just as one sun calls Mother Earth to arise from her dark slumber... Just as one river weaves through a valley offering hope, strength & life to barren lands... Such is the impact of just one Lone Man. Such is the burden... ~Salinye Edited April 14, 2003 by Peredhil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrenWind Posted April 11, 2003 Report Share Posted April 11, 2003 I like this with one exception what is the symbol at the end of each line ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salinye Posted April 11, 2003 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2003 UHG *bangs head against a brick wall* Is it doing that AGAIN? *goes to edit* RAWWWRRR Thank you for the heads up. It doesn't show on mycomputer. ~Salinye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted April 14, 2003 Report Share Posted April 14, 2003 I fixed the last apostrophe catastrophe thingie. This is nifty. I could see using it as a Role Playing campaign introductory poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seii Posted April 14, 2003 Report Share Posted April 14, 2003 I've always loved short heroic poems. Good job, Salinye! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vlad Posted April 22, 2003 Report Share Posted April 22, 2003 Very interesting using parallel phrasing. I'm left to wonder who it is... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justin Silverblade Posted April 22, 2003 Report Share Posted April 22, 2003 Wonderful poetry! Thank you so much for sharing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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