Vlad Posted April 11, 2003 Report Share Posted April 11, 2003 Love is for the weak, A festering Plague, Found in this world- Full of Romeos, 'Tis such a disgrace, To be seen near them, Flaunting everything, Living for love's sake, Loving for life's time, Corrupted clouds create, Such a pain to bear, For we live as one, And I am the weak. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted April 14, 2003 Report Share Posted April 14, 2003 wow. A blistering diatrebe against a certain type, originally identified as the week... and then you turn it around and in and identify yourself with that group, denying the reader the choice of saying, "well, you just don't understand." Very effective technique! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justin Silverblade Posted May 1, 2003 Report Share Posted May 1, 2003 Simplicity, and yet so very engaging. I couldn't help but read it again and again. Sorry I didn't catch it when you first posted it. Bravo, good work! Thanks for sharing it - I enjoyed it very much. - Justin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salinye Posted May 3, 2003 Report Share Posted May 3, 2003 I mimic Peredhil's words!! I loved it! ~Salinye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheyenne Posted May 5, 2003 Report Share Posted May 5, 2003 I guess that makes me weak as well. Very well written, I enjoyed it immensley (sp?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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