Tasslehoff Posted February 28, 2003 Report Share Posted February 28, 2003 The words I wish to speak to you, Would express the ever growing desire to be with you, Not knowing what to say; Not knowing what to do, I stand off to the side; Standing all alone, Darkness of pain and rejection ever growing with-in, I turn away closing my eyes to it all, Hoping for it to all be gone, But of-course, Again and again it fails wishes And still there you are standing in my way, All this un-yielding pain; Its comes and goes and go like today and tomorrow, Why cant you see that things wouldnt be so bad, The mere thought of you being sad tears me up and kills my heart, But does it mean anything to you? How can you say it does! You are the one chucking that poisonous dart, When the hell does it end? If only these words I could speak to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archaneus Posted February 28, 2003 Report Share Posted February 28, 2003 Good job Tass. I like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted February 28, 2003 Report Share Posted February 28, 2003 Are you telling HER this? Or just feeling it so strongly she should be able to read between your lines and know? This communicates well. Perhaps you should give HER a copy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Big Pointy One Posted February 28, 2003 Report Share Posted February 28, 2003 *Grins* Well-written Tas. ~sigh~ I'm not that good at commentary, but I'll try... basically I can really see, even feel the emotion you're expressing here. And I can relate a fair amount too Gah, what else can I say except keep it up ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted February 28, 2003 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2003 Thansk you guys. And well.. Peredhil, to show this to her, would be like speaking Italian to a guy that can only speak Norwegian. She is just to damn blind, and it doesnt matter. I wont ever get to be with her, so I must move on I suppose.. -sigh- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted March 1, 2003 Report Share Posted March 1, 2003 ...no guts no glory dude... um, but you don't have to show her stuff, just make her feel special... if you wanna write her something... write her something to make her smile... but, hey you know your situation better than anyone... hmm... oh another thing... the worse regret in life is the regret of what might have of been... if you try and fail... well you'll better prepared for the next time... revery the dreamlost "once more into the brink" (i have no idea who said this) the dream continues... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted March 1, 2003 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2003 Reverie, if only it was that easy. We where off and on for 1.5 years, I tried, and she just didnt want it. No reason to fight it anymore. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted March 2, 2003 Report Share Posted March 2, 2003 like said you know your situation better than anyone else... it'll be okay... life's circular... you catch a break eventually... rev... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted March 2, 2003 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2003 Reverie.. I dont know WHAT You did [ ] But! Shelley4886: Can we talk? LaViTzCa: Its up to you Shelley4886: Then yes. -sigh- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted March 2, 2003 Report Share Posted March 2, 2003 (edited) he shoots he scores... way to go man... didn't do anything... you did... revery the dreamlost "sing a song in two's and three's... just one for the morning and one for the day..." the dream continues... Edited March 2, 2003 by reverie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted March 2, 2003 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2003 No congrats needed here. I didnt do anything myself, for like the poem says : If only these words I could speak to you. Like I said though, cant let it hold me back. Gotta just keep my head straight and keep moving Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vlad Posted March 3, 2003 Report Share Posted March 3, 2003 Sorry I didn't respond to this earlier. I guess I must have missed it, but... This is an excellent poem. I like the raw emotion conveyed, it is truly powerful. I'm also happy for you that RL ended relatively well. Hope it continues... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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