Cerulean Posted February 14, 2003 Report Share Posted February 14, 2003 (edited) wiping wet from cheeks i damn lands that sing war like a jingle leaving others to ring hands over the dead. This appeared when I was working on something else entirely in The Writer's Workshop, funny how that happens sometimes. C. Edited February 14, 2003 by Cerulean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Portrait of Zool Posted February 14, 2003 Report Share Posted February 14, 2003 Your poetry has lost none of it's power I see. I certainly hope to see much more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mira Posted February 15, 2003 Report Share Posted February 15, 2003 (edited) If only they would fight wars with words Edited February 15, 2003 by Mira Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archaneus Posted February 16, 2003 Report Share Posted February 16, 2003 Short and to the point, just like this comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted February 25, 2003 Report Share Posted February 25, 2003 Its amazing that often the smallest packages can contain the strongest messages. Great poem, Thank you for sharing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted February 25, 2003 Report Share Posted February 25, 2003 I'm glad you followed your Muse and wrote this. Sometimes discipline is knowing when to ignore the 'to-do' list. you have no idea how happy I am to see you back and writing again. -P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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