Gwaihir Posted January 20, 2002 Report Share Posted January 20, 2002 Repentant You’re mad at me, because I slipped, I was doing a job for you, I guess my loyalty wiggled. If I could just be mad at you, Say that you were unfair to me, At least being too relentless, That wouldn’t sting me half as much. I pass you in the halls, mentor, I can’t avoid glancing at you, Wishing for a cheering smile. I know you won’t, at least for now, But still I can’t resist. What if? Maybe now, you’ve forgiven me. I’d hear you want information. It doesn’t really matter what, Say you wanted someone followed. I enter your office, hoping, You look at me and shake your head. In truth you’re mad at me fairly, But that’s why I just can’t stand it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Stale AOD Posted January 20, 2002 Report Share Posted January 20, 2002 Excellent, I can definately remember a few occasions when those words would have done me good to hear __________________________________________ Ex-owner of the holy grail, Member of the Official A1 Zombie Club, Inventor of Green Slime and Initiate of the Pen is Mightier than the Sword Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Stale AOD Posted January 20, 2002 Report Share Posted January 20, 2002 Inspired Stale was, to write a little poem before heading for bed Nothing clever.. just, well, true... In true Army style, I found an evil name for it even Blood... It boils in my vains Every day, every night Twisting and turning Hot is my blood Dark sinister pains I can touch the light But I am trapped Hot is my blood Paper, ink stains Intellectual might Still it prevails Hot is my blood But when it rains Blocking your sight The barbarian sleeps Norse is my blood __________________________________________ Ex-owner of the holy grail, Member of the Official A1 Zombie Club, Inventor of Green Slime and Initiate of the Pen is Mightier than the Sword Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Foe Calibur Posted January 21, 2002 Report Share Posted January 21, 2002 Wonderful Gwaihir, I can see your title is well earned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted January 21, 2002 Report Share Posted January 21, 2002 *Gyr applauds the paired poems* *smile* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tralla Posted January 22, 2002 Report Share Posted January 22, 2002 hm... usually I'm on the giving end of the Silent Treatment, not the receiving end. *evil laugh* Beautifully portrayed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Celes Crusader Posted January 23, 2002 Report Share Posted January 23, 2002 I not only read it, I've sang it. Excellent dark poetry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ozymandias Posted January 28, 2002 Report Share Posted January 28, 2002 It's poetry like this that makes me sorry I gave up painting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted February 5, 2002 Report Share Posted February 5, 2002 Why do I envision Myth writing this Poem? Stale, yours is a FINE companion! Well done, the both of you! -Peredhil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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