Gyrfalcon Posted January 12, 2002 Report Share Posted January 12, 2002 Naive, mage, brash and bold as the fire he wields Jheric fox-quick thief, sparkle in his blue eyes, ready grin and sleight of hand, Erick Battle-tempered, time sharpened old as the land, hard as the steel of his sword, but smiling in hapiness and humor, humanity not lost to time's wear Gyrfalcon Desperate, searching, grasping, drowning, fighting to survive, to remain what he was Daryl Behind them all, green eyed and dark haired, cut short, jeweled with pearls of rainwater, ducking through the downpour, wandering his way home, thinking what he will write, what he will say, what will be said and imagining his lives. Gregory Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yui-chan Posted January 12, 2002 Report Share Posted January 12, 2002 I like this alot, Gyrfalcon. Nicely done. And your reality was just ... so very real. Not pretensious and not overdone. Just real. I applaude you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted January 12, 2002 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2002 *flushes slightly* You're too kind, Yui-chan. *grins* Thank you. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gwaihir Posted January 13, 2002 Report Share Posted January 13, 2002 How neat! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted January 14, 2002 Report Share Posted January 14, 2002 This is very well done and a neat concept. I know something has hit home when I think, "Oh! Now I want to write one of those!" -Peredhil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tralla Posted January 17, 2002 Report Share Posted January 17, 2002 That is very cool. And I agree with Peredhil, now I wanna write one too! =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bhurin Posted January 18, 2002 Report Share Posted January 18, 2002 Gyrfalcon, your sense of style is very innovative and honest. I think this is an excellant piece of work... Bhurin withstands admitting he wishes he had thought of the idea first, and now wanting to write one himself... ... Okay, I'm good. Signed- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justin Silverblade Posted January 18, 2002 Report Share Posted January 18, 2002 Great idea, and writing Gyr. I like it a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ozymandias Posted January 28, 2002 Report Share Posted January 28, 2002 You've been holding out on us, Gyr. Shame on you! Keep up the poetry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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