Gwaihir Posted October 16, 2001 Report Share Posted October 16, 2001 Posted by Myth, and dedicated to ~O~ who got me thinking in haikus (and probably won't like this dedication Taught to hide my pain, Coldness was our way of life. I learned to be brave. They laughed at my tears. Said only the strong can laugh, Forced me to survive. Tough way to grow up. A cliched angry young man Who wasn’t even male. [~O~ suggests that my dedication makes it unclear whose growing up I'm writing about. I mean Myth's, only the style is taken from ~O~.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted October 17, 2001 Report Share Posted October 17, 2001 Raging Inferno I've learned to trust is to die My knife is MY friend. Gauging weaknesses I move through society But my eyes smile not. The crucible test To kill innocents unknown, I passed - and died too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ozymandias Posted September 21, 2006 Report Share Posted September 21, 2006 Gwai - *snaps fingers appreciatively* Well done. Reading them really felt like reading a poetic opening to a new fantasy novel. :>) "A cliched angry young man who wasn't even male" That in particular caught my eye - and spurs me to want to read more on Myth. Apparently there're some things I do not yet know...or forgot. Pered- Evocative as ever. Yow. O_O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gwaihir Posted September 24, 2006 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2006 Wow had I forgotten about those. Da-am I didn't knwo this still existed. Ozy, by the way that haiku comment was about living in a man's world and living a fighting, testosterone filled lifestyle Book's still in first draft . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted September 24, 2006 Report Share Posted September 24, 2006 seamless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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