Zepheri

things look really nice. its like...the old pen but with new ink and cover. it fits

Of course I'm still in...A demon never goes back on her word.

Thank you for your comment ^_________________^ *hug*

*giggle* that's funny, and so very true ^__________^

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I would like to try it out... I don't know all of you, and you don't me, but I thik it will be fun. Do you think it would be helpful if we gave a bit of info on our selfs first Sweetcherrie? That way we can help out with the writing.... just a thought... I would like to sign in with my character Zepheri... if that is ok...

WOW!!!! That's so ture. I agree with everything you said. One should never just settle for someone, they should be with that person becuase they love them. I do hope you can find the girl that makes you want to run through a storm or fight an evil dragon for. Becuase I know that if you do that, then this girl is turly for you. It's nice to see you post something my friend, how about giving me a call? We haven't talked in forever!!!! <3 u ^_________^

Wow!!! That's so sweet. Is this poem for someone or did you just write it? I personally would like to see this poem with more written, then again short, sweet and to the point is sometimes the best approach. Good job

OMG!!!! Such a twist on things I like it very much so!!! Is Max good or evil? We may never know!!! And who is that kid that walked in there? How does he know everything? I wish to read more!!! I wish to know!!! You are doing a wonderful job my friend, please keep up the good work, my mind is going crazy with questions that need to be answered!!! ^_____________^

My friend you have a wonderful story being created here!!! I love the character, the detail!! I'm not to well when it comes to grammar and spelling so I cannot help you with that, I’m sorry. However I do love that past and present come together, it seems that is what you are doing anyway. I like that Jenna is not quickly to believe in what is going on, that she is defiant, her reactions are well done. Max seems to be... I think his character needs to be a bit more developed, I'm not getting too much of who he is, but I think it's a good start I would like to see more of Max's character latter on. As far as improvement, I would say, "I would really like to know what is happening!!!" then again it is a story and everything cannot be revealed just yet. I don't see anything that you need to work on as of right now besides Max, like I said. My mane thing is that you and I seem to have similarities in our writing style, I like that a lot!!! I can relate to what you are saying/writing, I can read it very easily and I enjoy doing so. I hope I have helped you, I'm not sure if I did. If you have any specific questions on a paragraph or something you would like for me to look at by all means tell me and I'll do what I can for you my friend.

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I like these poems. I feel sad when reading them, however my work is just the same. I like that can relate my life and feelings to them. You did a great job on that, capturing the emotions anyway. This is the first time I’ve read your work; I must say I’m very impressed. I would give you more, such as grammar and what not, but I’m retarded when it comes to that. Keep up the good work ^___^

O_O....I didn't even know!!!! WOW, I FELL LOVED ^______________________^ Thank you *glomps all those around her* I'm soooooooo happy!!!!!

More better be on the way!!!! or else.....I'm not sure what else at the time, but I'll get back to you on that.

WOW, this is a great song. There is a lot of meaning behind it. It brings back a lot of my own childhood. This part here reminds me of the fact that I'm always having to move every three years, I've lived in a lot of places in my short life. I live in southern France I'm from a Texas ranch I come from Mecca and Peru I live across the street In the mountains, on a beach I come from everywhere And my name is you This part here i think any one could relate too, I at first liked to climb trees, but now I love to read and sometimes wacth TV. I like to run and climb I like to sit and read I like to watch my TV, too Thanks for sharing this with us, I really like it. Are there memories that come back when you here this song?

I've read this before and as always I love your work. I'm not sure what to say then what I have already told you before. I still love this and I really want to read more of it, and I want you to finish it!!! I really want to know what happens...so get to writing!!!!

Thank you Fae . I think I'm an okay writer, I still need more work. If you want to read more, I posted a story (Dragon Stones.) on here, perhaps, if you want too, you can take a look.

wow, this poem is sooo cute and I do beleive you will make it far one day Good job, keep it up.

To: NightFae and Dros Thank you both for your advice. I'm glad you like my work. I will look out for your stories, poems, what have you as well. I also love Poe. I can relate to Poe in the fact that all of his works are sad, or horror stories. That is mostly what I right, along with fantasy. Once again thank you both.

Thank you for your help on this. I understand everything now and can see how you go those ideas. I think I was trying to use archaic vioce in the one poem, as far as active/passive vioce I wasn't intending on either, it just happened. But once agan thank you for your help.