Beautiful Nightmare

Yeah i think he ment you should post more and i sgree with him i really think you should you are an excellent writter!

As usual you have created a wonderful and beautiful poem! your such a great poet i hope to someday write like you!!!!

*hugs* wow this is so touching! Its really sad *hugs again* its really good though

*smiles and hugs* this relates alot to you! its an excellent poem hun! i had to read it like 3 times i was like wow hehehehe!

*hugs* this is really sad omg! Its a really cool poem though hmmm could make it into a song ok i just relized that if it is a song i sound so stupid! hehehe ok enough ramblings its a great poem and i really love it!

Wow thats like really good!!! I love the way you wrote it! Short but to the point! Its very very good! :)

Wow i really really like it its pretty cool kinda sounds like a song i wrote a little while age it kick ass!!!

*hugs* omg such an excellent poem!!!!

dad*hugs* your really amazing your such a good writter i hope one day im as quartre good as you are! i love it

*pouts and wipes a tear from her eye* i love it!

*hugs* cool poem and it is good to see you posting again!!

Everything fades, And everything dies, Everyone loves, Or at least they try. But i feel like i have been drained. Drained of life, And drained of love, And when you cry, You know you are alive, But these eyes have turned dry. And when you bleed, You feel the warm red blood, But this blood has turned to ice. I have seen beauty, Turn to beast. I have seen white Turn to black. And its only when i die, I will know i was alive. Cause when you cry You know you are alive, But these eyes have turned dry. And when you bleed, You feel the warm red blood, But this blood has turned to ice

Awwwww this is so cute i love it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ummmm the last concert i went to see was Metallica and Linkin Park and The Darkness were there too! They all put on a really good perfomance and Metallica especially kicked ass!!!!! There was fireworks and fire and that began at the song blackened if any of you know the song! Anyway it was such a cool concert oooo and the lead singer from Linkin Park(Chester Bennington) Waved at me because i was up on my really tall friends shoulders standing so i was above everyone else and he waved!! I was in shock for several days after saying to myself "OH MY GOD HE WAVED TO ME!! TO ME AAAH!" Hehehehe!! Anyways i just thought i would add this because im going to see them again in june and i cannot wait!!

*hugs* i love it god i have done that hehehe!!!! Its kinda sucks! love your poem!

I like the short sentances i think its goes with the flow of the poem its very good i like it alot first poem huh? Wow its really good

Wow its really good and really touching!

meh its a really good poem! *hugs* glad to see you writting

*hugs* welcome to the pen hun!!! I loved your poem by the way!

Wow i think its really good i think its just wow i really like it and can kinda relate to it! *claps* Wyv except it or else *shakes her fist* hehehe

Aww its very good indeed hmmm you seem to be writting stuff about religion lately! Meh you write it very well though! Its vey very VERY good! Sorry just i like it alot! :woot:

Sorry im late *runs in and huggles the two happy birthday*

*grins* Cool pom zen!!! Shouldnt this be in the Banquet room though?

*This is a song me and my boyfriend wrote together-my first time writting with anyone* So when the hurting begins And the nightmares start I remember you And it warms my heart Your the closest to heaven THta i will ever get And i dont think i truley lived Until the day we met Can you get me out? Get me out of this sleepless night Can you get me out? Get me out of this normal life Please get me out. I cant stop thinking About you And i have noticed Just how much I miss you I have become so infatuated With you I have become so sleepless Without you Can you get me out? Get me out of this sleepless night Can you get me out? Get me out of this Normal life Please get me out.

Light fades Darkness wins Flowers sleep The sun dims. All of this Im my mind I wake up Only to find The darkness is stronger The light is dimmer While you are gone.