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Another great one Doomgaze. I'm always amazed by your ability to reperesent an idea so vividly. Great job.

In one word, agreement. I think most of us find ourselves doing the same thing. Only some of us, of the slightly more insane nature, think of more trivial things like world domination and things like that. Hehehe. Seriously though, good job.

It's ok, take your leave of absence. We won't be eternal angry or anything like that Lol. j/k See you when you get back.

I liked this one. I reall yshow the indecision and uncertainity we face everyday. I agree friends can be a great help in your decisions. So, overall, good job.

Heheheheheheh. Great. I liked how you made it seem like the spirit was really important, th way you described it's escpae from the Nether realm and all that and then it turned out being pig spirits! Great job. Mwuahahahahah. Don't worry, you didn't drive me insane I this just drew it out.

I like the questions presented, but this doesn't really sound like a poem to me. You should look at it and think of a way you could make it flow more. If that's the case I think I have reached Nirvana. Hehehe.

Wow, great stuff. I, along with the others, was held to attention. (hmm... that doesn't sound right) I'm wondering why you chnaged the rhyming scheme as well, but regardless of the scheme it was a great poem.

I feel that a lot, I think I've already lost mine though. Great work.

Wow. Really amplifies the pain caused by one experience. I have felt like killing myself many times, I mena cna anyone honestly say they haven't? I just haven't killed my instincts enought to actually end my own life. Oh well, more stupid ramblings on my part. Good job.

Desperation, seclusion it’s always on my mind Everywhere I go its people I find I want to get away from it all I want to stop answering the call Get away from me Or to the depths of Hell I’ll flee Even now you follow? Get away or I’ll make you cowl Flee in fear, run away I will make you pay I’ll make the whole world pay for all No matter how small I will destroy them all, decimate You have opened the floodgate Torrent, sweeping the world, unleashed A plague, a pestilence, a disease that cannot be ceased It crushes all, leaving nothing in its wake The floods come, the fires bake Complete now, is the final stage I have broken free of my cage Alone I stand, in this world of death

Yay! Someone wrote something about nature being alive and speaking. I am happy. Thank you for sharing. I absolutely love anything having to do with nature. This sounds to me as if it could be the thoughts of an Elf. This seems to imply that because we have shunned nature we cannot benefit from speaking to it. I like.

I think Reverie will like this one. Hehehe. Well, it's not bad, it just sounds... I don't know, lacking. Like it needs more, but then again that could just be my insanity talking. Lol.

Nope you're right Rune, Knifes should be knives, but good job nonetheless Nightshade.

Rune, living with alchoholics can be tough, I wouldn't know personally, but I have been around them a lot and I know hwo it can really suck. Just look to the future and realize that all things do end eventually and hang in there.

Great job Tasslehoff. This has real potenial as a song.

I know a lot of you people have read these books and don't agree with me but I suggest reading the Wheel of Time series by Robert Jordan. Also, it is surprising how many people haven't read the Lord of the Rings series. Don't judge teh books by the movies, the movies aren't nearly as good as teh books. I don't have an excert, but nonetheless I still say read them.

Great poem. You can join teh ranks of the dark an dmorbid writers with Deadly Nightshade, and I and many others here that escape me at this moment. Welcome to the Pen.

Well, I agree with you completely on what you're saying, but I'm with Tasslehoff here. I really can't say much more. You're right though schools are stupid. Lol.

Yay! ~grins madly~

Ooooh... I thought I was your best friend. ~looks downcast~

http://www.themightypen.net/public/style_emoticons/default/ohmy.gif You... you... you... cold hearted person. Don't you realize the apple's pain? Hehehe.

I know this is about a fire, but did this realy happen to you? Oh ya, by the way, good job.

Ya, what Pered said. Lol.

Hahahahahahahaha. Nothing more to say.

I liked this one a lot. I have always liked poems that deal with nature. Great job.