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I really like this one, Alaeha. I can't really say much else but good job.

Yeah, I'm with Tamaranis on this one, I can never think of editting ideas but I can say one thing... Great job.

Wow...

I don't have any wonderful critiquing to do, but I can say I enjoyed it.

Beautiful. That is the only word I can find to describe it.

Sounds to me like some sort of summons to heros or opening to a quest in a book. That could just be my strange thought patterns.

Thanks for al the great comments. Doom - I was refering to feeling like the second one. Alaeha - that's jsut the point, they won't allow mw to be the shoulder or the ear. Pered - Thanks Deg - The whole point was people wouldn't let me be involved and you saying you will is already destroying my argument. Lol. Scratches head at Zool. "Um... thanks." Lol. Again, thank you all for your comments.

This is really vivid and GREAT job.

Not really sure if that's teh best title but, oh well. I haven't posted a poem in a while so I decided I needed to post one and I really needed to vent. Inspired by the "wonderful" last day of February. My friends have all their problems They all have there complicated lives I sit in the corner and wonder When can I be involved? When will I be allowed to be a friend? I feel alone, they ignore me and continue They have their soap operas They have their problems All I want to do is know and help And all they do is pass me by as if I don’t exist Can I be called a friend When all I can do is observe?

Mine's fine, not that it really matters as I've gotten a total of about 6 PMs... (walks off mumbling somthing about nobody loving him)

Good job Tass. I like.

The last one of these I saw looked like a conglamoration that didn't really work together but this one does.

Lol. I am not the best in the world at the game, but I share your frustration at the players who are so bad they get killed about 5 minutes in and you are left all alone to face a hoard of creatures and.. and... ~pant, pant~ I'm OK. Lol.

Happy birthday Alaeha. And good job on the poem Pered. Oh, and Alaeha, don't let Brute push you around.

Yay! You're back!

You have a great one here Pered. I really like the way it sounds. For some reason it just sounds great and has a natural, almost, beauty to it. Gret work Pered.

Just like the story, really good.

Great job! I agree with the others completely, well written and I also am a hater of love.

I really liked this. I think this has great potential as the prologue to a much longer story. I emphasize MUCH because I would really like to see what you make of this. I thnk you could get a medium size book if you used it correctly. As I said great story and idea.

I understand what it's talking about and it was very nicely written. Did you do this and just didn't want to reveal your age, Pered. Lol. Well whoever wrote it, I say good job. (Oh ya, I'm 15 )

Yay! :woot: This is a great poem. I love the personification (or rather, demonification ) of our fear, hatred, etc. Great job.

Ooh. Nice job Rune. I always like things about nature and you told of nature as a living organism. Me likes, lol.

Hey Tass. I think you did a good job on this one. I like how you refered to nature. Good work as always Tass.

I think it's great idea. Sorry I don't have a long explanatory comment.

Welcome, I'll be the third to say it (sticks out his tongue to everyone who hasn't already said it) . Like Deg said, anyone is welcome here so feel at home. Oh ya, I'm the most insane one here.