andrea hawk Posted May 14, 2003 Report Share Posted May 14, 2003 We kill each other off with looks of terrifying fear. Then we crawl off to our corners To smoke pot and drink some beer. But it really doesn't matter Cause it's only just a game; And the only way to win Is going down the road of shame. Then we do some fancy steps And fall down 13 stairs. We raise our cups to make a toast And comb back all our hairs. But it really doesn't matter Cause it's only just a game; And the only way to win Is going down the road of fame. We sit in front of mirrors Crunching candy in the dark. We love to roll down windows And honk at dogs that cannot bark. But it really doesn't matter Cause it's only just a game; And the only way to win Is going down the poodle lane. Our very favorite pastime Is hiking up so very high That no one will ever catch us When we finally learn to fly. But it really doesn't matter Cause it's only just a game; And the only way to win Is going down three roads (the same) Yup it's me... again... Andrea Hawk. Miss me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amos Greywind Posted May 14, 2003 Report Share Posted May 14, 2003 Good poem, it flowed nicely Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted May 14, 2003 Report Share Posted May 14, 2003 Yes! I DID miss you. Welcome back in a big way - good song. Of course, as you could predict, knowing me... I think there is so much more to life! Hugs Welcome home to the Pen. -Peredhil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrea hawk Posted May 15, 2003 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2003 Thanks very much you guys. Peredhil you are the very best in the whole world!!! Thanks for bringing me back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chanz Posted May 15, 2003 Report Share Posted May 15, 2003 Goooood Job!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vlad Posted May 15, 2003 Report Share Posted May 15, 2003 Ooohhh... very good!!! I like the consistent verse that seems to to repeat itself, but change, or am I just really tired? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Falcon2001 Posted May 16, 2003 Report Share Posted May 16, 2003 Wow, you've gotten a LOT better since you first joined, Andrea. Keep writing - if this is just a preview, I'm waiting for the full meal deal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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