DoomGaze Posted March 1, 2003 Report Share Posted March 1, 2003 Remains Untouched ------------------------------------ Your blood has stained my wings, Turning them from black to crimson red. A feather falls lifelessly, Resting on the white marble floor. My wings shine, reflecting all light, Sweet, dark eyes staring in the clouds. The sun shines down on everything, But my soul, remains untouched. Tears of impurity drop from the heavens, And rain hard on my head. The blood drips from the feathers, Making them pure once more. With all that happening, I see your still standing right here. Smiles, uncommon to my face, appear, More light shines, but my soul, remains untouched. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elvida Posted March 1, 2003 Report Share Posted March 1, 2003 nice poem...very graphic. :yuiwink2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted March 1, 2003 Report Share Posted March 1, 2003 Very interesting Doom. its good.. Very good. I like the concept.. And it reminds me.. * Flys off to go thru teh Angel-Fly-Through-Wing-Wash * Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted March 1, 2003 Report Share Posted March 1, 2003 THAT was NEAT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archaneus Posted March 1, 2003 Report Share Posted March 1, 2003 This is really vivid and GREAT job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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