Elvida

*smiles* thanks. im actually quite amazed at how well it turned out..*dances* im going to try using that style more often.

Never Ending Battle Ultimate loss and ultimate pain, Ultimate pleasure and ultimate gain. The fears of a lifetime in one little thought The loss of a love and the battles you’ve fought. He stands there looking out, She stands there looking in. They face each other through the ages, Neither losing, neither wins. She wants what she can’t have, He knows he can’t go back. To do so would ruin so many lives, Painting all their colours black. Ultimate loss and ultimate pain, There is no pleasure, and even less gain. The fears of a lifetime in one little thought, The loss of a love and the battles you’ve fought. -------------------------------------------------------- so there we have it. hope ya likes.

hmm...i dunno. It sounded kind of unfinished to me...maybe another few lines. But other than that...its great! good job.

ooh...ok.. thanks lol. and yeah. hidden rage CAN be hard to deal with..thank god i dont go through it that often..0_o

umm....*sweatdrops* it posted this one and the Blood Calling one twice again...could someone tell me whats going on? it said that it failed at the mail command....and then i refreshed and went back...and i didnt try to repost...but when i went to the banquet room...wow..there were two of each. sorry for the trouble..but HELP!!!!

She sees them watching her Eyes looking over her nearly perfect body Tight black clothing Dark makeup Light hair Some of them are scared of her She might kill them Or sacrifice them to her evil god Some of them want her Want to hear her say their name Long to see through her shields Most of them hate her Scared of the power she has The ability to get what she wants They dont know The bloodlust withing How close they are to the truth Some of them call her "vampire" They're so right But she refuses to completely let it and bring on the beginning of the end ------------------------------------------------ wooooh....last one..*relief* thank god...no more blood for a while

Cutting deeper Watching the blood flow down her hand Supressing the urge to feed WAnting it Its ruby streams hypnotize her Calling her to drink So pretty Caught between heaven and hell Controlling her very nature Losing control Rasing her hand to her lips Tasting the blood and loving it So pure --------------------------------- I certainly seem to be churning out a lot of these dont I...hmm...lol

yeah...i was feeling rather emotional when i wrote it...much like when i write most of my other stuff..lol..and thanks to whoever deleted the other copy of this poem thing

umm...looks like i posted this twice...didnt mean to..lol..and i dont know how to delete one...heelp!

Bloodlust Have you ever Suppressed your very nature The lust to feed The urge to kill Have you ever Felt like you would die Being denied the only thing you want That’ll make you feel alive I have kept myself from feeding Controlled myself from killing Its hard Being so alone But having so much as well -------------------------------------- eeh...was written at about 2 in the morning...so yeah

*huggles you* welcome back

thanks..and Peredhil...thanks for the suggestions

yesh...evil vampire angels have been alive long enough to know true beauty.... thank you for the comments...

Beauty True beauty is the love of that special person. It is the snow falling at night. It is that perfect moment…when you feel perfect peace It is a red rose with thorns Beauty can be pain, pleasure, or sorrow Beauty is the blood that flows from a cut, The kisses that flow from an innocent mouth The tears that flow from a broken heart. Once I thought I knew beauty I saw beauty in the airbrushed faces of celebrities It was in the makeup and clothes of a model It was a statement said by the wealthy, and I conformed to it. Now I know that I know beauty. I see beauty in art, in poetry. I see it in my loved one’s face, And I think “such a thing should be without price” ---------------------------------------------------------- it was a tad random....but please....give me your thoughts and ideas on it...i have a feeling it could maybe use a bit of work.

thanks guys...you're all so great...yeah. i should be here to stay unless my brain stops functioning properly again....

yes.....im alive. hopefully i'll start writing more....i'm kinda missing it. i dunno. anybody remember me? lol...*feels lost and out of place*

I like it...that poem really clicks with what I've had happen before. great work

NOT the abusive hitting...NO bleeding way. but the emotional hitting ya know when someone says they love you and then they hit you with "I think we should break up" after a couple months. that kind of hitting

Call me completely insane...but I would have taken the red pill. I dunno....I'm just weird that way...

You tell me to forget, but I can't. They ask me why I still love you, but I can't say Everything that's happened, I somehow forgive you, But you've hit me again, and I can't let go. You say you have a reason, but I think thats a lie You're just scared of what I still feel inside. They think that I'm hopeless, that I'm not worth their time But they're just scared of what I can do. I know this doesn't make any sense, You'd have to feel the same. And hopefully this will come to pass And I'll somehow forget this pain. ---------------------------------------------

im a little late for the party...lol Happy birthday Chanz...i'd sing but im bad at it right now.

THANK YA guyz...and gals... i appreciate your comments

alright! Ayshela: the four-five line thing wasnt deliberate( i think...cause in Science i wasnt really thinking)and yeah...it seems that his/OUR love has no chance of ever coming back Peredhil: I often feel that way actually...its quite creepy...my self confidence in my works isnt that great...lol

Go ahead and leave me alone I had no choice in this I wouldn't have come to you tonight If I knew this would be my final kiss Push me away and shut the door, Leave me sinking to the floor In pain Bring me to the brink of death With your fatal words The love we had would never end If you hadn't run away The life I had wouldn't round this bend If I hadn't decided to pay This price of death I see the blood running down my hands I watch my pale face in the mirror The tears I cry now will never be seen Except by my ever-faithful Queen, Peace ---------------------------------------------- meh....I tried

Very good...i enjoyed it