Elvida

GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!! I remember feeling like that...except it was with a best friend

YEAH that was a little freaky...good job Rune

Chanz...that was beautiful...your mom would be SO proud of you...

*claps for you* good job Chanz....youi've just taken my place as a great writer.... im now in like 55th place....

may the force be with you.... :yuiwink: yes that WAS corny, and i admit it...but it suits my mood AND the occasion from MY point of veiw and WHY am i saying all this? anyways. Have Fun Tass.

0_0 trust you to get the deed done Doomgaze. nice work.

yeah. that's great keep up the good work :D

I just got a new address because my hotmail isn't working anymore.... freaky_elvida@yahoo.ca

oOo...thanks....those were great. :D

heehee...yeah.The magic eraser dust scares me...

Thanks guys..i appreciate your comments

OK....thank ya.

nice poem...very graphic. :yuiwink2:

Pain ------------- I cry as i see your lips move, And as I hear your final words. I walk away, cheeks stinging from the tears, And my mind acts out my greatest fears. My body paralyzes as I remember your touch So sweet, yet so sad, I cry some more. There is no refuge from this pain I feel, The only escape is...death. --------------------------------- I decided to speak my mind...lol, dont worry i dont do it too often.

yeah mines's good..

Feel free to make suggestions on my poem in the Writer's Workshop.lol.....i need help.

......very good.heartfelt.

I think it's a good idea...RPing looks like fun.

The person above me has the Gaze of Doom.

Who's That Girl ------------------- The darkness of night consumes me, I feel alive in it, as fire floods my veins. I walk endlessly for hours, Dreaming and hoping, Wondering and waiting. Then a group of people ruin my reverie. They turn and gaze, wondering who I am. Who this black-clad girl is, That dares to walk in the night. I just smile and think, "This is me." I am the girl you pass by at night, Who watches you as you walk away. I am the shadow in the night. The one that thrives in The delicious darkness of it all. --------------------------------------- I think it needs more work......any suggestions?I only changed a few words, and a couple lines in the first verse......

yeah i know....I'll work on it i was just not too awake last night when i wrote it......lol

whoa...that was great...i humbly bow before the master/mistress of morbid poetry......

The darkness of night consumes me. I feel alive in it, and fire floods my veins. I walk endlessly for hours, Just thinking and planning, Watching and waiting. Then crowds of people ruin my reverie. They turn and stare wondering who I am. Who the black-clad girl is, Who dares to walk alone in the night. I just smile and think "This is me." I am the girl you walk past at night, Who watches you as you walk away. I am the fire in the night. The one that thrives in The delicious darkness of it all. ----------------------------------------- Not my best I know... <_< stupid not-getting-any-sleep syndrome.lol just kidding.

very nice.i repeat my earlier statement...the one about "i like it" and i add a "very much"

Tass....she?Nice poem Doom....very...interesting!!!i like it.