Deadly Nightshade Posted February 14, 2003 Report Share Posted February 14, 2003 *Gasp!* Happyness wow http://www.themightypen.net/public/style_emoticons/default/ohmy.gif a birthday really dose wonders to ones mind Everything will be just fine Everything will be okay The tears are long shed The heartbreak is gone I can breath once more Take deep breaths And just smile to the sky I survived the greatest battle A battle of life, my life And I won No more tears Heartache Just smile Laugh Be happy For everything is all right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HopperWolf Posted February 15, 2003 Report Share Posted February 15, 2003 *s* nice. it flows pretty well. Definitely like the non standard rhythm, it enhances the exuberance. yay, life can be good, see? see? SEE? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted February 15, 2003 Report Share Posted February 15, 2003 great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archaneus Posted February 16, 2003 Report Share Posted February 16, 2003 I'm not exactly an expert on happy poetry myself but I say good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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