jamesdevin Posted February 6, 2003 Report Share Posted February 6, 2003 Frozen My heart, frozen, trapped by time, love and emotion, feelings I don't have. My past, a riddle, a challenge with no end, a world unfair, unreal like never before. Lost emotions, frozen in time, my life, empty, like a pointless rhyme. My heart, my world, dark and unfair, full of people, like me, frozen in time. James Devin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vlad Posted February 6, 2003 Report Share Posted February 6, 2003 Take a candle, Warm your life, Get away from the handle, Of that glistening knife, Relax and enjoy, Your stay at the pen, Venting's a good toy, But to stop, you must know when. I don't mean to discourage, Nor be a bad influence, Just don't lead a scourge, Past the holy fence. This is my favorite of your poems so far... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoomGaze Posted February 6, 2003 Report Share Posted February 6, 2003 Good poem, keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted February 6, 2003 Report Share Posted February 6, 2003 you know, my heart feels cold, ofcourse, I do have a cold, but I mean.. Yea.. Erm. Nevermind.. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archaneus Posted February 6, 2003 Report Share Posted February 6, 2003 My favorite or yours. I really like this one. Hope to see more like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted February 11, 2003 Report Share Posted February 11, 2003 My past, a riddle, a challenge with no end, a world unfair, unreal like never before. My past... a riddle. For some reason that really sticks with me. Kept trying to come up with something more creative to say but none the less, great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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