Tasslehoff Posted January 25, 2003 Report Share Posted January 25, 2003 -= Drugs of Lies =- I know what I should have said, I know that I messed up, Made a mistake; Broke my promise, You turned your back to me, Filling people minds with the lies, Just like the drugs filled yours, Now turned into the bad guy, Its over, The doors are closed, The darkness blocking my path even further, You said you were "sorry", I looked into your eyes, Yet all I could still see was the images, The images that have forever deemed me the "Bad Guy", There is no change; No chance, I can feel my heart die; And all the pain within this darkness, It kills me; Stabbing me repeatedly, And you ask why; You say I am crazy, But its cause I do care, And I know I wont let that become a lie, If only in this beholders eye... The Kender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vlad Posted January 25, 2003 Report Share Posted January 25, 2003 Wow. Just wow. All I can say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted January 27, 2003 Report Share Posted January 27, 2003 I think I will echo Vlad's comment and simply say "wow." Poems are often written above love lost for whatever reason, but its always kind of uncomfortable to read a poem about love lost because of a sour situation. This poem is one of those, its written so well that I sort of squirmed when I read it..because of how vivid of a picture it paints. Great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annael Posted February 2, 2003 Report Share Posted February 2, 2003 very well written. The words you wrote make the images come easily to the mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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