Vlad Posted January 21, 2003 Report Share Posted January 21, 2003 I don't know what I was thinking, but I give full credit to the others of the pen. All I did was take one (or two) line(s) out of the most recent poems each... They may have a different meaning because they are out of context, but this might turn out really good, or really bad. The air is heavy Excuse me if I seemed relieved. There, at last I have peace. I can't think I can't be perfect You can stand there, Lookin' like a fool, As the clouds darkened, the blades sharpened on the knifes, The constant anger and jealousy, Dark, always dark is this what's it like to die? Where is the sky... white tracers, smoking trails But I don't want to burn My heart aches. My hammer drops... still alone. Hmm... I like it... Oh, before I forget, credit is due to: Jonathan Wolfe, Valdar and Astralis, Crowgirl, Falcon, Tasslehoff, DoPeY, Degenero Angelus, Blondemoon, Lordsmeagol, Cyril Darkcloud... And mostly me! Because I thought of it! And I am a genius! And should be worshipped! And *continues rambling as he gets dragged off by men in white lab coats* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted January 21, 2003 Report Share Posted January 21, 2003 I've done something like this, though the lines taken were from a book. *might have to go dig it up at some point* Good work, and yes, remember to credit the other poets. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jonathan_wolfe Posted January 21, 2003 Report Share Posted January 21, 2003 Gives a loud hoot and holler Woohee, I love this... You've really pulled from all of them beautifully! It's like reading all of them.. sort of.. but different. Kudoes for taking from -two- of mine. This was truely a group effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted January 21, 2003 Report Share Posted January 21, 2003 Rune stares blankly at Vlad as he does his best to impersonate each presenter as he goes from line to line. Ooo neat idea! and it was very effective. Its sort of like a collage of pen art. Rune takes the poem, walks over to the nearest wall and does her best to hang it for public view. Only problem is that considering her height, it is really only hung about 2 foot off the ground. Shrugging she thinks it looks good to her and waves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Degenero Angelus Posted January 21, 2003 Report Share Posted January 21, 2003 I'm.... flattered. It's a really good peice of.. collective poetry, and I'm proud to be a part of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vlad Posted January 21, 2003 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2003 I should do this again later when more people post other poems. So there's your incentive... get to work! Why am I not posting original poetry, you ask? I'm in the process of writing a short story which will be later posted in the assembly room. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zariah Posted January 24, 2003 Report Share Posted January 24, 2003 well I have to say that you are really creative and talented. Thank you for using a line of mine! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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