Rahsash Geldich Posted January 29, 2002 Report Share Posted January 29, 2002 I am the Embodiment of Evil, I am the Portrayer of Light, I love to Wreak Havoc And give the Blind Sight I have a blue million Faces And not all are Masks. I am One and am All In case Anyone Asks I Hate and I Love, I Live and I Die. All for the Fun; Never the Why I Plot and I Track, I wander The World. Real or Fantasy Together, all swirled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lord Seth Exodus Posted January 30, 2002 Report Share Posted January 30, 2002 Bravo! *applaudes* Grand rhyme, it flows very well. I love the contraversial ideas; Christ and anti-Christ, good and evil, light and dark, true and false. It's thought provoking, at least to me. Again, kudos to you. Seth Exodus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tralla Posted January 30, 2002 Report Share Posted January 30, 2002 Oooh very spiffy. I like the contrasting ideas, too. =) (You stole my line, Seth! Grr!) "I have a blue million Faces And not all are Masks." I like these lines a lot, they really jump out at me. But then, I have the whole fascination with masks, and images, and personalities, and stuff... yeah... Very cool poem. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahsash Geldich Posted January 30, 2002 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2002 ::recognizes a fellow Calvin and Hobbes Reader in Seth:: I like writing in metaphor, but sometimes I get so far into it, the meaning is lost! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lord Seth Exodus Posted January 30, 2002 Report Share Posted January 30, 2002 You pegged me, Rahsash; I love Calvin and Hobbes. Bill Watterson is a genieus. Keep up the good work. Sorry to steal your line, Tralla, my dear; just have to be a little quicker -Seth Exodus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ozymandias Posted January 31, 2002 Report Share Posted January 31, 2002 No wonder your imagery is all so epic. ;>) But seriously, It's very, VERY evocative of myth and painters like Michael Whalen or the brothers Hildebrandt for me. I get the nagging feeling sometimes that my own writing sounds a little too much like the newest episode of Spaceman Spiff. Edited by: Ozymandias the Elder at: 1/31/02 6:18:52 pm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahsash Geldich Posted January 31, 2002 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2002 ::grins:: Then we'll be intreped poetry daydreamers as a group eh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted February 5, 2002 Report Share Posted February 5, 2002 I love Calvin and Hobbs... But also your poem. I get a picture of Shiva or Kali when I read that; The duality of the Hindu dieties. -Peredhil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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