Falcon2001 Posted January 26, 2002 Report Share Posted January 26, 2002 Lost and found When I first met you I thought that I knew All the things about life But you showed me How I want to be And that's a life with you And I'm lost in your smile I found myself in your love I never thought I'd feel this way Until you came along that day Well life is cruel But you're a jewel Perfect in every way I'm so depressed And life's a mess But you're a shining star Well I'm lost in the darkness But I found myself in your eyes I never thought I'd ever be So alive and full and free So I love you dear And I know you hear My voice calling out So never forget And please don't regret The love that I have for you I was lost in the hatred But you rescued me from the lies I never thought that I would say I love you to you, girl Yeah, I never thought in my wildest dreams, that I would ever see the day That I would have the nerve to say I love you Cioden Darkeye Page of The Mighty Pen President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tralla Posted January 26, 2002 Report Share Posted January 26, 2002 Aww... This is so cool! Now why can't I find I guy like that??? Great poem Falcon, with a touching message. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted January 26, 2002 Report Share Posted January 26, 2002 *Gyr applauds!* I agree, its not depressing. Excellent poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Falcon2001 Posted January 27, 2002 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2002 Tralla, you have to understand that 'guys like that' happen to have their quirks...Gyr, I hope that bite's healing nicely. Cioden Darkeye Page of The Mighty Pen President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ozymandias Posted January 28, 2002 Report Share Posted January 28, 2002 Just wanted to give my heartiest Beatnik applause to your new stuff, Cioden/William/Falcon (too MANY of you!) and to tell you what a nifty sig that is. Yours too, Tralla. Did you make them yourselves? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tralla Posted January 29, 2002 Report Share Posted January 29, 2002 Aw, thanks Ozzy. =) Yes, I did make my sig. Sorry, I know it's Ager, but the damn thing's on auto-post and half the time I don't remember to turn it off. *Kicks at her absent-minded goblin* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted February 5, 2002 Report Share Posted February 5, 2002 Great love song! You really should consider an album. In the refrain, when I recite this aloud, I stumble on the "I" and the "But I" found... It's prolly me, but does the tongue naturally flow? You know it must be good when I'm concerning myself with how well the tongue moves when singing it! -Peredhil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Falcon2001 Posted February 5, 2002 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2002 Thank you Peredhil! BTW, it does flow for me, but the cool thing about about poems is that everyone sees it different. It's kind of a green day-ish one. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Jess Posted February 9, 2002 Report Share Posted February 9, 2002 You know, if you sent her this she would love it. She likes you. I wish you'd stop obsessing and start doing something about it. Maybe even something like I would, though I don't think you should abandon your morals, if you catch my drift here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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