Salinye Posted August 1, 2004 Report Share Posted August 1, 2004 (edited) OOC: Sorry, some wounds die hard, neh? Critique and comments are welcome. I'm not claiming it's a well thought out poem. Merely a vent of poetic steam. Why can’t you just love me? Was my birth your penalty? Is it so hard to speak lovingly? Have you lost all sense of decency? You’ve tainted all of my memories! You choose to think of me unpleasantly! You nurture my insecurities! I cannot live with this INSANITY! You look up and notice me. I am confused to hear your plea! I violently disagree! Long ago I set you free! Quit looking to me accusingly! Did you not know you hold the key? Can you not see I’ve found humility? Why keep yourself enslaved to hostility? Why can’t YOU just love me? ~Salinye Edited August 1, 2004 by Salinye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayshela Posted August 1, 2004 Report Share Posted August 1, 2004 no words, hon.. just.. *hugs and holds you* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted August 1, 2004 Report Share Posted August 1, 2004 *huggles and holds comfortingly* For what it matters, I wuv oo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salinye Posted August 1, 2004 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2004 OH! *blushes* I'm fine, truly! Just a small puff of steam that surfaced calling for a little poetic release. ~Salinye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mira Posted August 1, 2004 Report Share Posted August 1, 2004 Liar! That's what you are! You keep saying "I can't write poetry that well", and then what do you do? You go and write something as lovely as this! Hmph! See if I listen to you ever again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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