Peredhil Posted September 8, 2003 Report Share Posted September 8, 2003 Written in real-time, transcribed at Wren Wind's request. Minor word order changes to clean it up. EP31 In love with love, and the fantasy woman Which I painted over you You might've been good for me And I could've been good for you. But I loved the fantasy woman too much And didn't give up the dream And now we've parted into our lives Our togethers will never be seen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrenWind Posted September 8, 2003 Report Share Posted September 8, 2003 Thank you Hon *hugs* sometimes going with what flows at the moment produces wonderful things Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tattered Posted September 8, 2003 Report Share Posted September 8, 2003 (edited) That was great! I feel like there's more there, waiting,pushing to come out. Maybe adding to it or changing some words. I dunno, it just didn't satisfy my hunger to understand. Maybe thats the whole plan... Reading it one more time, I actually think it's fine the way it is. I think the problem is, that I have encountered this and was dumbfounded by his missguided efforts to make me fill the shoes of a woman not real. So when I read this...I just, it takes me back and I remeber that I couldn't understand how ridiculous he was for not accepting the real me! Thanks for putting a common stupidity and reality, Into Words We Can Read. Edited September 8, 2003 by Tattered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parmenion Posted September 8, 2003 Report Share Posted September 8, 2003 Very nice Peredhil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alaeha Posted September 8, 2003 Report Share Posted September 8, 2003 Hmm... I know a few people who need to read things like this... It's quite good. Very good, in fact. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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