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The Pen is Mightier than the Sword

To the one I love


Vincent Silver

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I never meant to hurt you

I didn't want you to cry

You ask me why I did it

I really don't know why

 

I took an already broken heart

And shattered it even more

I took your beautiful feelings

And shattered them on the floor

 

I'm sorry for what I did

I'll do anything to make it up to you

I'll always love you

Even with the stupid things I do

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you know...

this is not only really good, but...

it's amazing.

From the time of Adam, it seems like men, when they apologize or explain, try to excuse it all away as if it wasn't wrong, or shift the blame and responsibility.

This work of yours didn't. It took total responsibility without being a martyr.

 

Peredhil idly fixes a spelling error so the work's beauty shines brighter and walks off thoughtfully.

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