Vlad Posted August 22, 2003 Report Share Posted August 22, 2003 My emotion found, From deep within. A sin. A joy. A love. A hate. Lost to wander, Living blind. A sin, A love. A joy, A hate. What now? What? Love sin. Hate joy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chanz Posted August 23, 2003 Report Share Posted August 23, 2003 Nice play with words!!!!!!! I really liked this. To me it was just a nice, fun poem. Nice Job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorciere Posted August 23, 2003 Report Share Posted August 23, 2003 Very nice culmination, I liked it but wanted it to be longer for some reason, but I'm way too picky. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhapsody Posted August 23, 2003 Report Share Posted August 23, 2003 LOL. Very clever. I love puns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parmenion Posted August 24, 2003 Report Share Posted August 24, 2003 *Chuckles* this was fun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted August 25, 2003 Report Share Posted August 25, 2003 I dont think I quite got this one Vlad. Next time im around IRC or MSN could you explain it to me? I am very curious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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