Gwaihir Posted March 19, 2003 Report Share Posted March 19, 2003 This isn't written about any love interest....not everything has to be straight from life (almost all my poems arent, in fact), so do me a favour and don't say that it is. In Between Still young enough to hate to see the death Of old ideals and shiny romances But old enough to be obsessed with that, Because her older self knows it happens Still young enough to gaze out the window To stop and look for the rays of sunshine, But old enough to have checked the forecast, And know that it will rain and hail all day. Still young enough to hope for your kind words, To smile lovingly when I see you, But old enough to know t’will never be. Yes, old enough to know you’re gone from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted March 19, 2003 Report Share Posted March 19, 2003 Peredhil rushes in Wow! That could be straight from life! Agily ducking the blow, he gives Gwai a hug and snickers. Sorry, couldn't resist. Strangely enough, that duality of choice of perception (can't think of another of to throw in ) is still present in my life... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justin Silverblade Posted March 26, 2003 Report Share Posted March 26, 2003 Nice. But sad. Great poetry Gwai. (Why didn't I see this one before?). Definately a goody to read. Thanks so much for sharing. - Justin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted April 9, 2003 Report Share Posted April 9, 2003 Wow thats really well written. I like the wording and the general sentance structure. Overall its very grand. Thank you for sharing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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