Tasslehoff Posted January 21, 2003 Report Share Posted January 21, 2003 hiding away in the dark, lonliness creeps over me, chills to the bone, blinded by the photos of the past, lost and cannot see. these games I do not wish to play, can barely rise to my feet, cannot ignore what these voices say, holding me down, struggling I try to fight, trying to do my best to stay afloat in this game, curse these nightmares day and night.. not going to stay down, gripping the edge of sanity, emotions flowing like an untamed river, thoughts surging through my head, standing upon my feet once again, no longer letting my mind lay dead... throwing the blindfolds away, blinking as I walk into the new light, never could forsee such a joyous day, stepping into the light things stay the same.... crawling out of my bed, wandering to the shower closing the door, leaving the *new day* behind, mumbling " just another night in eternities locks " I do cry.. --Well there is my newest poem.. But I must go.. Cant really explain it all, because I have to do my math homework on the other side.. -- The Kender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted January 23, 2003 Report Share Posted January 23, 2003 very good... it reminds me the ghost from my past, and the struggles i face to over come them... very nice... revery the dreamlost "tears flow unbidden" the dream continues... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted January 23, 2003 Report Share Posted January 23, 2003 great poem Tassle. When i first read through it, the thing that stood out was how complete it sounded (if that makes sense.) After rereading it a couple times to try and get a feel for it, I realize that its really one of the most well rounded poems ive read in awhile. Great job! I cant wait to read more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted January 24, 2003 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2003 Thanks Rune. I am actually trully happy with it also. I think this is one of my favorites.. Dont know about best, but -shrugs-, your best work always happens when you are dead. lol The Kender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blondemoon Posted January 24, 2003 Report Share Posted January 24, 2003 *quietly applauds, lacking for words at the moment, due to tiredness* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted January 24, 2003 Report Share Posted January 24, 2003 It's kind of funny but the difference in font actually affected how i first read it. For some reason it was distracting and made me feel like I kept missing something. Im a visual person though, and that could be why. Just thought Id share that rather .. non interesting fact. hehe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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