Rahsash Geldich Posted March 21, 2002 Report Share Posted March 21, 2002 ((for a break from my regular style, a Shakespearian <sp?> sonnet)) Fate made you run far too fast- into me. You made laughter bubble from my lips. You have the most beautiful eyes I'll see, Upon your mouth should dance my fingertips. I spend eternity watching your face Waiting for your lips to curve in a grin. Prince of Cats, you have a subtle smooth grace To the point that watching you is a sin. But I'll still sit here and daydream of you And wish that I knew what you think of me. When you came in, it was on wing- you flew. I know that you can make my courage flee. Though you won't get this, more often than not, I'm sitting here thinking man are you hott! ((of course, this is a little more fanciful ::giggles: ) Edited by: Rahsash Geldich at: 3/29/02 9:07:18 pm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted March 22, 2002 Report Share Posted March 22, 2002 *Gyr laughs* Now read it at the guy, especially if you want to attract him. =) *grins and applauds* Wonderful poetry, not quite Shakespearian, I think (though I could be wrong- I've only had the one monologue memorized), but great none the less. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted March 22, 2002 Report Share Posted March 22, 2002 I like it. Would be touched and honored if someone wrote it for me. *grins* It's always nice to get stuff like that. Oh well, try running into him this time. Should be fun revery the dreamlost "fuzzy wuzzy was a bear." (mother goose) the dream continues... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Portrait of Zool Posted March 22, 2002 Report Share Posted March 22, 2002 Passionate - in a very warm way. ~Zool~ Ancient, The Pen is Mightier than the Sword. Bard of Terra, Patron Saint of Aspiring Bards. Elder than dirt, more foolish than a jester, able to trip over the smallest logic in a single step. It's... Oh, you know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahsash Geldich Posted March 23, 2002 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2002 I was trying to write it under those sonnet guidelines: 14 lines 10 syllables in each line abab cdcd efef gg rhyme scheme. And I'm too chicken to give it to him ::giggles:: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ozymandias Posted March 27, 2002 Report Share Posted March 27, 2002 Come onnnn...Go for it! Oh yeah, and it's a good poem! Very smooth combination of the traditional and the, well, teen romance comedy. ;>) Well done! I know if a girl gave me that she'd have my UNdivided attention. Probably not my ability to speak English, no, but certainly my attention. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Falcon2001 Posted March 27, 2002 Report Share Posted March 27, 2002 *Falcon wanders in wearing a long white doctor's robe and a stethescope* Hmm...stick out your tongue and say Ah... *Rashash does so and makes a aaaaahhh sound* Good good, now say apple. *Rashash, puzzled, does so and makes a sound along the lines of affhole* Well excuse me! Here, say Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious. *Rashash glares at Falcon* Okay okay then, here, give him that poem and then thank me in the morning. Anyway, hand him that poem, god I think I'd get all weird and stuttery if I girl I knew wrote me a poem like that. "F-f-fff-ff-for m-m-muh-mmm--me?" But that's just me, so try it and see. I mean, what have you got to lose? Btw, don't answer that last question. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Katiya Damodred Posted March 27, 2002 Report Share Posted March 27, 2002 ::smothers a giggle:: That is a great poem, I love it! But the inspiration...he's mean to me. O well, there's no accounting for taste... ;-) I'm kiddin. And hey everyone else, its been forever since I've been here, but I may hang around the poetry site for a while. Image by FlamingText.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahsash Geldich Posted March 28, 2002 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2002 ::sticks her tongue out at Katiya:: No one asked you! ::sits down in her Box and all is heard are faint scratches of pen on paper:: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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