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Shower (Yes, I am back)


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Shower

 

Like Sun's first rays on a frigid winter day

The water, warm and wet, from my faucet

Helps me greet the day with life

I revel in the first freezing splash

and thrill in the heat of the full blast

My skin is washed clean by the falling rain

And I feel a new man

While I sing along in my deep voice

to the music that I play with my stereo

Sometimes rock, sometimes not

But always adding to the spell that my morning ritual throws over me

like a blanket thrown over a freezing man

or a cup of water to a thirsty man

I love my shower for what it does to me

Revives me

Resets me

Restarts me

 

Yes, I'm back, and now I guess I'll start writing again.

Cioden Darkeye

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*first comment happy dance*

 

an interesting topic, but a valid one. There is a reason I take a shower every morning, besides cleanliness. I've even scared myself a few times by looking in the mirror after getting up... oi. =D Good writing, keep it up!

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  • 2 weeks later...

Peredhil laughs softly.

 

How wonderfully whimsical.

 

Although given the sleep schedules around my home, if you played music or sang in the shower, someone would prolly try to recreate the shower scene from Psycho...

 

You know, when you're just writing light verse, you're a marvelous pleasure to read. It's nice to see some fun work from you.

 

-Peredhil

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