James Crow Posted October 16, 2014 Report Share Posted October 16, 2014 We fell in love, as the world turns. We thought time had stopped, but the world turns. Before I knew it, the world turns, and I found myself all alone. As the world turns, time passed, and the world turns. I found myself looking at the stars, as the world turns. You came up to me, and the world turns. We laughed and caught up, as the world turns. And no matter where we end up, the world turns. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brighid of Byrness Posted October 16, 2014 Report Share Posted October 16, 2014 The world turns, and turns, and turns....whether we're on it or not...and keeps turning through individual ups and downs. The Elizabethans called it "The Wheel of Fortune." It's great to see you're still writing; it seems to be pretty quiet around here! My private message feature isn't working (or else I would send you one inquiring about the state of affairs of James, Scheherazade, Zool, and Brighid. I think they're still in a cavern somewhere). Hopefully that will get remedied (relatively) soon :smile: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted October 22, 2014 Report Share Posted October 22, 2014 Good use of repetition. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Appy Posted October 23, 2014 Report Share Posted October 23, 2014 Lovely, wistful and indeed, nice use of repetition Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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