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Sing out Loud


Snypiuer

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I've been uncreative for a while now and decided to force myself to write to see if I can get that little so-and-so muse of mine to come back. So, here's what I got - and yes, it needs work. So any suggestions will be appreciated! :blink:

 

I sing out loud

Though I cannot sing

For it lets my heart

and my soul

Take wing

 

I sing so loud

That I sometimes cry

As I shout what's kept

Deep inside

To the sky

 

I sing out loud

Until I can't go on

My voice broken

And my tears

are gone

 

When there's nothing left

 

I sing out loud

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:D

 

Not sure what you think you need to work on so I'm not even starting.

 

Just wanted to say that this resonates with something within me and has me nodding and smiling about the truth of it, so well done already ^_^

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