Peredhil Posted June 3, 2009 Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 Roses are red, the deep crimson of blood spurting Thorns are sharp, as knives, shiny, pointy, cutting Violets are blue, veins popping in fear and How much I enjoy. the screams while I'm Hunting with you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Appy Posted June 3, 2009 Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 Awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Preprise Posted June 3, 2009 Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 Creepy cool! I love the "leap frog" effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baxter85 Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Cool poem Peredhil. I like how every other line can be read almost as its own seperate poem. I also liked how peace is met with a sense of pain in the following italic line. Definitely worth repeated reads. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrenWind Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Very creapy Hon. viseral imagery Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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