Tanuchan Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Peredhil, I do hope you go back to this story! I'm always a fan of your tales, you know that As for this one — I love the humor in it, the "Britishness" of the Colonel (honestly, I don't know any Brit, but in my mind it fits very well...) and the counterpoint in Dorchester. For some reason, the story makes me think of safaris in the 19th/early 20th century... as a curiosity, was there any inspiration coming from H.G Well's Time Machine? The beginning of your story made me immediately think of it, though just for a couple paragraphs. I don't have much more to say right now, just that I'll be waiting forward to new installments and maybe then I can actually write better comments... still stretching my fingers and coaxing them back to life after a quite long absence in posts here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Inspirations were Monty Python's Flying Circus and P.G. Wodehouse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gwaihir Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Just to second what Tanny said, this was a fun read and I too hope that you continue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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