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Experiment Gone Awry, by Peredhil

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Peredhil, I do hope you go back to this story! I'm always a fan of your tales, you know that :)

 

As for this one — I love the humor in it, the "Britishness" of the Colonel (honestly, I don't know any Brit, but in my mind it fits very well...) and the counterpoint in Dorchester. For some reason, the story makes me think of safaris in the 19th/early 20th century... as a curiosity, was there any inspiration coming from H.G Well's Time Machine? The beginning of your story made me immediately think of it, though just for a couple paragraphs.

 

I don't have much more to say right now, just that I'll be waiting forward to new installments and maybe then I can actually write better comments... still stretching my fingers and coaxing them back to life after a quite long absence in posts here ;)

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Just to second what Tanny said, this was a fun read and I too hope that you continue.

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