Peredhil Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 I pace irritably lashing my frustration as a tail, Wanting to help but you're hurting like hell, All I can do just isn't enough and life is treating you so very rough It's hard to exist at a time like this, When emotions rage. (I'm so very pissed) I know what I want to be, protective as a lion, Harder to be a man than a male there's no denyin', The situation is evolving, listening is better than problem solving It's hard to be a man when love's in pain, So much emotion. (We're going insane) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patrick Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Wow, very powerful poem. *hugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver WInd Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 Nicely, down I really liked this, great rythem and flow, loved what you did with the rhyme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mynx Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 Ditto to all that's been said Nicely written *hugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kandara Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 I really like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Degorram Posted December 27, 2007 Report Share Posted December 27, 2007 I liked it very much Peredhil. I know how the receiving end feels. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Regel Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Passionate, and extremely human. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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