Appy Posted September 3, 2005 Report Share Posted September 3, 2005 (edited) ~ written in May, revised together with Sweetcherrie in June, finalized last night. Thanks Sweet! ~ They all scream inside my head The girls scream, both the happy and the sad anguished frustration; longing to stop the things they ought to do The Queen screams, after having found her voice angered frustration; wishing to change the things she has to do I don't scream, just sit there and hug my knees ambushed frustration; seeking to find the things I want to do They all scream inside my head Edited September 3, 2005 by Appy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerberus Posted September 4, 2005 Report Share Posted September 4, 2005 ~looks over the above post and thinks for a moment~ you know... i usualy dont like poetry very much. but this.... ~nods~ Realy though. the emotion that it presented was there for me. i dont have any tips for you or anything because...well.. i realy wouldnt know how to write one my self. So far as im concernd, you are good ta go! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetcherrie Posted November 26, 2005 Report Share Posted November 26, 2005 methinks I should react to this.....well, should've reacted to this before... Amazing poem....even better read out loud Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted November 26, 2005 Report Share Posted November 26, 2005 Outstanding Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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