The Death of Rats Posted March 11, 2005 Report Share Posted March 11, 2005 smallmindedfoulmouthedselfishshoutingoutlovemeImallthatsworthwhile oughttobekickedandsquareinthehead andinstylevilechildwhydoyourileIdonotunderstandbutleavemealoneforawhileand youmayetliveyouandyourcroniessobigandsophonythinkthattheyhaveall theanswersfrombeginningtoendtheylistentoyoursbutnowhenyoudisagreewith themyousaythatyourethevictimyoustandandcryfoulwhenyoureffortstoundermine usallforyourownedificationareshowneventoyoureyestobeshallow Damn you. And have a nice day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayshela Posted March 11, 2005 Report Share Posted March 11, 2005 *hands the Death of Rats a very small sledgehammer to use on the keyboard which obviously already has a missing space key. * btb, i highly recomment a large dose of soothing silence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted March 11, 2005 Report Share Posted March 11, 2005 Offers his keyboard as well, and a bigger hammer, wary of the scythe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Portrait of Zool Posted March 11, 2005 Report Share Posted March 11, 2005 I must admit though, as a technique it works well at expressing raw emotion. I suggest an entire book of poems of run together words, each exploring a different aspect of modern life - the conflicts, the heartbreak, the rage. Reading it is like absorbing a cubist painting, semi-intellectual, but with the structure subconsciously coloring between the lines. Call it "Pressures". It'll sell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Death of Rats Posted March 12, 2005 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2005 The Grim Squeaker's weirdly glowuing eye sockets glint in acceptance of the hammers. Before disapperaring with both, however, both are dropped from a fifteen-foor height onto Peredhil's keyobaord, and the Death of Rats sketches a small bow to first Elrond, the Zool, then Ayshela, and vanishe sin a puff of illogic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katzaniel Posted March 13, 2005 Report Share Posted March 13, 2005 Note: The harder you try, the harder it is to read. When one instead lets the sentence flow by, even before understanding the previous word, the next words put it into immediate context. Thank goodness I figured that out after only two sentences. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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