Ayshela Posted October 11, 2003 Report Share Posted October 11, 2003 RUN! ~~~ Run, run, have to run, hide, where? Where? There must be someplace if i only, only, knew where was safe. What is safe? Gods, no, they'll find me here. Not here and not there either. Where? Where? Have to run, but where? And how do i get there from here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tamaranis Posted October 11, 2003 Report Share Posted October 11, 2003 Ooh, neat. I especially like the title, I nearly never pay attention to this forum, but that drew me in. I have to read it a couple times to get the full sense of panic, though. 'Course, that might be more a comment on me than the poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted October 11, 2003 Report Share Posted October 11, 2003 Ouch. Makes me want to make you a safe place inside you, where you can peer out at the world with confidence. huggles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayshela Posted October 11, 2003 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2003 *hugs* unfortunately, that would be misplaced confidence.. but i do appreciate the thought. :`( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beautiful Nightmare Posted October 20, 2003 Report Share Posted October 20, 2003 *hides you under a blanky* Really good poem! I dont know what made you write it but well thankfully you wrote it bercause its an excellent poem and very different too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Morbid Angel Posted October 22, 2003 Report Share Posted October 22, 2003 wow!!! i liked that poem, the sense of panic really shone through. i liked the way it was set out- really got the panic out. Morbid Angel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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