X-Sabre Posted September 27, 2003 Report Share Posted September 27, 2003 (edited) [censored because of bad things] Edited November 28, 2003 by X-Sabre Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted September 27, 2003 Report Share Posted September 27, 2003 Dark... very dark. But compelling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salinye Posted September 27, 2003 Report Share Posted September 27, 2003 I like this. I just saw Phantom of the Opera last night, and so this fits the mind frame of the Phantom to me fairly well. Very raw and detailed. I like it. ~Salinye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Appy Posted September 27, 2003 Report Share Posted September 27, 2003 Very dark indeed, but well told I especially like these three lines, for their flow and the picture that they weave: Dig deep to find the actual truth. Past the maggots, past the stench. Beneath the lies, down to the roots. Keep writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrenWind Posted September 27, 2003 Report Share Posted September 27, 2003 *agrees with Appy * That is a very good stanza very vivid imagery . Love it Wren Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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