Vincent Silver Posted September 15, 2003 Report Share Posted September 15, 2003 (It's a poem about suicide but no worries,I'm not trying anything) I don't care... About it any more I don't care... Just want to shut the door I want to die... Find a kinife that loves my flesh I want to die... Watch the blood spill on the floor red and fresh Everything is over... I just going to die Everything is over... This is my goodbye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted September 15, 2003 Report Share Posted September 15, 2003 It feels like that sometimes... As long as you write it out instead of acting on it. Big Hugs, 'cause I'd miss your voice if it fell silent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alaeha Posted September 15, 2003 Report Share Posted September 15, 2003 Glad you put in that bit up front... Because if you go and die, I swear I'll hunt you down and kill you. *Mock Glares* It's a well done poem... *Hugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayshela Posted November 12, 2003 Report Share Posted November 12, 2003 *nods* i also am so VERY glad you're not trying anything.. cuz if you did i'd have to hunt you down and drag you back kicking and screaming all the way.. only one suggestion, aside from "don't you dare" Watch the blood spill on the floor red and freshthe metre of this is just a bit off to go with the rest, and i think i'd edit that to "watch the blood spill, red and fresh" otherwise - *nod* loud and clear, my friend, loud and clear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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