Rune

hehe! Happy birthday!!!

Happy Birthday!

Happy Birthday.

Mine is kinda easy. Rune, rhymes with Dune, or prune, or spoon, or .. loon(ey)

Happy Birthday!

Ohayo! I am late! Or maybe I showed up on time and you all were early. *looks around*

Hullo, and welcome home. ^__^

*knee high huggles for all*

OOC: Gonna go ahead and put this story to rest. My interests are elsewhere at this moment and I am not sure if I can continue it. Thank you all for your contribution to the story, It was a great time while it lasted.

Rune blinked several times. “You guys sure are a funny lot” She said out loud. “I mean we have been standing here for what feels like days and some of you keep forgetting who you are and where your going and..” Her voice trails off as her eyes go in circles and she topples over. “Oi, confused myself” she says, patting her head and rubbing her belly. Suddenly an unpleasant look fell on her face. “I don’t feel so good.” She said, a slight unhealthy smirk appeared on her lips. “I.. I need to go.” With a turn she started to scribble something in the air when suddenly she was interrupted by a loud “hiccup.” A huge musical note fell onto the floor. “Oops, I meant to spell phone.. guess this tone will have to do” She handed it to the nearest person. “Use this to call that fellow when you all are ready to leave” she replied. “Just rub it a few times and it will send a prerecorded message to him to let him know you all are going.” Suddenly her face turned green and she ran out of the room. “I knew I shouldn’t have eaten that entire bag of gummis” was all you could hear as she disappeared around the corner. “Good luck on your journey!” was the final statement that rang through the minds of all present.

Amazing as always *cheers for Yui!*

Happy Birthday!!

Thanks for takin the time to comment on everything Wyld!

It's ok, It can be late! Thats part of why these are neat. You can write in the timeframe alloted or post afterwards, its really up to you. Its a theme is all so that you can maybe take up the challenge and write about something you are (or arnt) familiar with. That was a beautiful poem Tassie.

hehe too funny Justin. That was wonderful Pere, and just lovely Wren. Thanks for helpin make these a success guys! ^__^

awwwwwwww! So cute! Rune giggles and runs around the two of them clapping. Its so interesting to see someone idolize someone and not constantly throw it in their face. I think thats my problem at times, when I idolize someone I really really want them to know and half of the time it scares them off! This is a great poem. Its true to the heart and touching and well written in my opinon.

I havent seen the series but that poem was wonderful.

heh, ironic in it's nature considering the source. Clever indead. *chuckles*

Great subject. I really like the different sections and the general statement. I agree that the ending is slightly off and therefore seems to stop rather than end. Its beautiful none the less. Thank you for sharing.

Answering that question is no different than answering whether or not you think God is the all mighty being and will make everything ok in the end. It all depends on how you believe and what you honestly feel the best way out of a situation is. I am not condoning suicide, but I have met people in the past who do feel that it is the answer when things are too hard for them to handle. Fortunately those people have also been some of the strongest I have ever had the pleasure of knowing and as a result they take the thoughts of death very very seriously and will probably outlive us all because they fight even harder when things get alittle too hard to handle.

hehe, we have quite a few talented song writers here at the pen. Thanks for sharing!

A sunset is often proclaimed to be one of the most beautiful things on earth to witness with the naked eye. In this poem it becomes a solemn and eerie event where the sunlight bathing the land is compared to blood drenching a cloth to a degree. It is very descriptive and intense. It is also the perfect length in my opinion, because of the graphic nature of the poem.. If it were too long it would become overpowering. I have not had a chance to read a ton of your work but so far I’m very impressed. Hopefully there are some others I haven’t seen yet and will get to today.

"When the roach roars, " *giggles* I never played archmage, but it was grand none the less.

Ooo its an epic poem. *swoons* I really like complete story poems. You know a poem is good where you find yourself identifying the character and following along waiting for something to happen. There is great imagery scattered throughout the poem and wonderful symbolism and comparisons to even a modern world (even though it seems to indicate it is set in a time of swordsmen or blade wielding classes). [edit] corrected some spelling errors [/edit]