Falcon2001

First point: Yeah, I'm over you. I've been over you for a while. Second point: Duh you love that oaf. I think I noticed somewhere along the line. Third point: I don't need your friendship. I've got friends, and I think attempting suicide SEVEN TIMES is more than enough trying. BTW, attempting is making the action and failing. Three loose knots, three dull blades, and one missed slice. Yes you were there, but not always. That's the only thing I ask of a friend, is that they always be there. Of course, to date, I've only ever had ONE person fulfill that, but that's another story. I thank you for the conversations and listening to me, but I'm not going after you. In time you will see what I meant. And if you don't, then it's your loss, not mine. When you decide to grow up and become more patient and less throw-a-fit-ey, then come on back and we'll welcome you with open arms. Until then, do whatever you want. Oh, and happy 11-month Anniversary. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta

Did you know that the inventor of mountain dew was William Jones? Interesting Trivia...lol. BTW, great poem, though I prefer soda or cider...OR MAINLINING CAFFEINE!!!MWAHAHAHA!!!THE POOOOOOOOOOOOWER!!!

Read the subject a few times, and imagine I repeated myself...LOL! Great poem, and you know I think you're a great poet...err..poetess...err....damn...

*Falcon scrambles around trying to apologize, and ends up flat on his face in front of Signe* I'm sorry I'm sorry, I have no clue how this one slipped by me...grr...bad computer. Anyway, good grief you're a wonderful poet...err...poetess...err...whatever. Whatever it is, you're amazing at it, like really really really really really good...hmm...is it potatoess? Or Potatoe...hmm... *Falcon walks off mumbling to himself, determined to solve the riddle once and for all.* *A few seconds later, he hits his head on a low doorway, passes out, and forgets the entire thing*

(Conversion confusion, this is the original post in this thread) This is kinda weird...I've got an idea, it's to different people...each song has a different chorus, but similar structure...lesse here... Oh yeah, and I realize the structure is flip-flopped on the last verse and the first. Not really songs, poems. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love me, Like I wanted you Hate me, The way I needed to Kill me Under the shining moon Drop me And watch me fully bloom I don't need your life Or your everpresent glances What is the deep problem That you have? I needed you for so long But now I don't and I'm so happy I love all this freedom That I have... Why did you make me Love you? I knew you wanted my heart Me too This is so strange to me Is it? Or am did I ever really Exist? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Humor me Whilst we sit alone Hold me When I need a home Love me As a friend always Help me Till the end of days I never knew how Much you were there Until you told me why Oh why? You've done so much for me And never asked for Anything in return Thank you... Why have you always Helped me? You've always been a true Friend to me... I know I've tried for you So hard To be the kind of friend You deserve... One will read it One will not One will be there One will not Well then, this seems fairly easy. Thank you Jess, for all you've done. And Goodbye, Andrea, thanks for all the suicidal nights. Good Riddance.

This poem was good the first time I read it. It was better the second time. The third time, it was amazing. This is the fourth time. I have to stop reading it, or my head will explode.

Mwahaha, that was good, I remember that...great thread...and I especially liked the part where I chimed in with 'I got put in a blender!' YAY! Of course, things haven't much changed... *Walks off singing I got put in a blender to himself*

I like the ones where the Dragon wins Good poem though, and amazingly, the lines are long...I've noticed all of my poetry has really short lines. this one doesn't. Don't think I'm crazy, just tired. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta

YAY! Good poem...though I never knew that you were a female...err...sorry, miss. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta

Thanks, Ozymandius...hmm...I'm wondering whether an electric guitar would work too well at a gathering... MWAHAHAH! Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta

Good grief, have you ever written a BAD poem? I'm running out of compliments, brilliant as always, Peredhil. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta

Oh yeah, it's Nyyark, go Nyyark, yay! This is really good, go for it! Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta

Great poem, Peredhil...well, I don't think you've ever written something that I didn't like, but just reaffirming it... THIS IS GREAT STUFF!!! Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta

I'm not innocent...I'm not innocent...I'm not innocent, I'M JUST CRAZY! lol Go jess! I've already told you this poem is fantastic...etc...etc...but now you know again. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta

You held me close, My love was fine I could never ever realize The looks were true The purpose false Back up girl It's time to halt An end to all My suffering An end to things love didn't bring So listen now To my little song And when I'm done Go on alone I think you should... BACK UP Give me space All your memories in my face BACK UP Stand back now I'm too far gone to Wonder how BACK UP!!! I listened to Your misery The right thing, yes But oh the pain I never ever Thought of myself Although I did it For your health My love was fine My love was true My love was lust I wanted you Not your body But just you Love's two ways girl How about you Why don't you just... BACK UP! Clear on out Your mistakes are Your own doubts BACK UP! Wipe your eyes It's your turn to Realize You won't change Without the truth So fall on down And break your youth I'll stand by Ya need to fall If you don't lose once You'll lose 'em all So don't curse me Cause I don't care Life is better When you breathe fresh air so... BACK UP! You're going to crash Sit around blaming life And fall down on your ass BACK UP! Life sucks, so @#%$ it Live your own life And carry your own bucket BACK UP! BACK UP AND TAKE A LOOK AROUND! BACK UP! Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta

(Date stamp/conversion confusion, this is actually the first post) Bear with me here, this sounds a lot like Powerman 5000...I think...but I can't be sure. So just think of it as a rock song. Jump to the beat Let yourself go Shake your head And feel the tempo You're all alone In a sea of flesh Feelin' nothing' pressin' in 'Cept for the breath Suddenly stop Ask yourself why Why do you feel this urge inside? I've got the answers I've got the show Get ready, 1 2 3 Here we go! Why, why, Why don't ya die? Why don't I sprout Black wings and fly? Why won't she love me Why does he lie? Why does the anger Well up inside Tell me the answers or shut up and sigh Why, why why why why? Sit on the floor Head in your hands He's out @#%$ Another woman You won't accept it You won't believe You don't require A cost for his need A quarter whore Is how you feel Sitting and begging Is that the deal? Why why, Why won't he die? Why can't you leave him Why won't you try? Why can't you see the Lie in his eyes Why does his laughter Seem so like ice Why does the answer Scream and cry? Why why why why why? Holding on to An exquisite pain Over, and over And over again You always love him You always care He'll always @#%$ you And never be there Why do you hurt yourself Why must you cry? Come with me, darling I'll show you the light Why why, Why don't I die? I'm so obsessed with you And I don't know why Why is your body Perfect and fine Why is your beauty only matched by your mind Why do you love me but never say why Why? WHY DOES THE HATRED WELL UP INSIDE WHY DOES THE MAGIC NEVER SEEM FINE WHY DOES THE LAUGHTER LOOK LIKE A LIE Why??? WHY??? WHY??? WHY WHY WHY??? Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta Edited by: Falcon2001 at: 2/10/02 1:14:52 am

Well whoever it is is an @#%$, Jess, if he thinks that...but that's my opinion Great poem, like I told ya before. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta

The Word: I sat at the computer And tried to think Of all the things that you are And what you mean to me And I sat and I sat and I sat and I sat And I still couldn’t think Of a word or a phrase that IS you And I kept on thinking until it hurt So I Stopped And rethought it over And thought about who you are: You are lovelier than the starry sky More precious to me than life Your mind is keener than a knife And your smile could melt a glacier You are kinder than the healing hand And serenity is your tool You can relax me with a single word And you’re so trusting and full of love And you love me for just who I am… I sat alone at the computer Trying to think About what word describes you most: Is it love? Is it life? How about serene? Or kind, wise, loving and everything else All rolled into one? I searched through the dictionary Front to back , back to front And I found the word The word that tells me who you are The word that shows the world The word, the word, a simple word But one so dear to me The only word I ever found That word, my dear is Perfect Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta

Cioden tried to sneak in after the alchohol, but the Quill-Bearer belt-buckle he just bought screwed him over. Turning from the large doorman, he brought out his sword and crossed himself. Spinning, he whacked the doorman across the side of the head, knocking him to the floor. Alarms sounded, and Cioden muttered something to himself. "Poop." Running ahead, he flung sleep spells at all those who got in his way until he found Nyyark in his room. Smiling evilly, he drew out a long slim dagger with a ebon handle and a 3/4 foot steel blade only about an inch wide. Flipping it in the air, he drew out a piece of paper and threw it under the spinning knife. Falling to the ground, the knife impaled the paper. Cioden smiled and spun around, kicking the knife. Paper and blade hurtled toward Nyyark at blinding speed. When he opened his eyes, he saw the knife sticking out of the the wall millimeters from his head. Cioden cocked his head, laughed roguishly and grinned. "That's a greeting, Nyyark, and a good one it is too." Turning, he dove headfirst into a shadow and dissapeared. Nyyark pulled the knife out of the wall and folded it up. Scanning the note, he read the contents aloud. "That knife's a present, boy, use it wisely. Also, I need to get in touch with you. silvertrip_2001@yahoo.com - Email me or I might come back." "Your friend in the shadows, Cioden Darkeye" OOC: Email me, Nyyark, I need to get in touch with you.

Thank you Peredhil! BTW, it does flow for me, but the cool thing about about poems is that everyone sees it different. It's kind of a green day-ish one. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta

Go Nyyark! Go Nyyark! It's your birthday...er...no, it isn't. But have some cake anyway! Great poem! Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta

Mmmmmm...fishy...yum... Great stuff! Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta

Regrettably enough, my posting of critiques and compliments as of late has been sporadic at best, but I am now attempting to make up for some of my error. But anyway, great poem, Gwaihir! I don't see you often enough on #thepen to talk to you, but keep up the good work. (Of course, you ARE a bard if I remember correctly. Of course your work is good.) Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta

It's early, but unfortunately this is the only time I have to view poems...but man, I almost missed out! Great poem, Nyvark (That IS your name, right? Like I said, it's early) keep up the great works. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta

Falcon walks onstage and looks around hesitantly, then clears his throat. "Well, uh...uhm...yeah...I'm...reallyreallyexcitedaboutallthispromotionstuffandit'sreallycoolandyeahandthankyouall!" Falcon steps down, bows and shuffles out with the news Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta